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Should I Fear My Autumn

should I fear my autumn when Juniper wilts with me and the sagging stars above edge closer to the sea should I fear my autumn with winter still to show my days hasten their step for night engulfs me so

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Date: 3/6/2024 7:54:00 AM
Deep and heartfelt write this is dear clive. Youv expressed so well here. And the opening line and title really is evocative and in such a metaphorical manner youv expressed so much here, sometimes we wonder, whether we should fear certain seasons of time, when all seems to fade, and skies are adorned with sagging stars; but to embrace them all is what we can do. Pleasure reading your work
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 3/7/2024 12:17:00 AM
I think the key word there is embace, you are are right, thanks for reading IE

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