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Should Doors Close

Should doors close, you'll find me awaiting Harking to aeolian whispers, Watching the windows for your return, Sitting in crepuscular stillness, Should doors close, balconies will open, Creating new possibilities Of our passionate love reunion, Look for marked jalousies, should doors close. 06.08.2020 Contest: Repeat the phrase Title: Should doors close Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 6/13/2020 7:26:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Jo :)
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Date: 6/13/2020 7:16:00 PM
wow, I was wondering how a person might choose to write on this theme of that given phrase. I love how you wove your lines together. Very nice, and congrats for the win
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Date: 6/13/2020 1:54:00 PM
a moving, wonderful poem, jo...warm congrats on your fine win in my contest..huggs
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Date: 6/13/2020 2:22:00 AM
Mysterious and romantic, with wonderful imagery and vocabulary. Congratulations on your win, Jo. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 6/11/2020 10:08:00 AM
What beautiful words Jo, I'm sure Nette will love it as do I
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Date: 6/11/2020 9:24:00 AM
Aeolian whispers, crepuscular stillness...you use such articulating words to express your emotions that they blend in your emotions to create a musical melody. Best wishes for the contest Jo. Much love and blessings :)
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Date: 6/11/2020 6:36:00 AM
What a lovely write..Harking to aeolian whispers..much longing and passion in your words.
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