Joanna Daniel Poet Verse

Should Doors Close

Should doors close, you'll find me awaiting 
Harking to aeolian whispers,
Watching the windows for your return,
Sitting in crepuscular stillness,
Should doors close, balconies will open,
Creating new possibilities
Of our passionate love reunion,
Look for marked jalousies, should doors close.


06.08.2020

Contest: Repeat the phrase 
Title: Should doors close 
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Aditi Mishra June 13, 2020 at 7:26 PM Back to congratulate you on your win Jo :)

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 7:16 PM wow, I was wondering how a person might choose to write on this theme of that given phrase. I love how you wove your lines together. Very nice, and congrats for the win

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2020 at 1:54 PM a moving, wonderful poem, jo...warm congrats on your fine win in my contest..huggs

John Watt June 13, 2020 at 2:22 AM Mysterious and romantic, with wonderful imagery and vocabulary. Congratulations on your win, Jo. Hugs ~ John

John Hamilton June 11, 2020 at 10:08 AM What beautiful words Jo, I'm sure Nette will love it as do I

Aditi Mishra June 11, 2020 at 9:24 AM Aeolian whispers, crepuscular stillness...you use such articulating words to express your emotions that they blend in your emotions to create a musical melody. Best wishes for the contest Jo. Much love and blessings :)

Vijay Pandit June 11, 2020 at 6:36 AM What a lovely write..Harking to aeolian whispers..much longing and passion in your words.