Short-Lived

Cast him not in bronze,
Nor sculpt in pottery clay,
Lay down the chisel
Where the marble bust holds sway.

Better to fold paper
In the Origami play,
So when fame has died,
He can quickly blow away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Jones Avatar
September 12, 2024 at 11:57 PM
This is so clever! It reads like an engaging puzzle to me. Quite a fun unique read Hilda!
Greenhough Avatar
September 13, 2024 at 2:22 PM
Thank you. There are a lot of also-rans in the famous world. The average world has thousands of opportunities. Life goes on.
Bayles Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 8:39 AM
I enjoyed this poem.
Greenhough Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 8:43 AM
Thank you.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 1:12 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun "Short-Lived" write. Love your ending. Origami just blow it away.... Have a blessed day.............................
Greenhough Avatar
August 14, 2024 at 2:03 PM
Thank you, Paula. I enjoy hearing from you.
Buehler Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 3:16 PM
Witty and wise, and the rhyming is quite nice, too. I love this, Hilda!
Greenhough Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 4:08 PM
Thank you.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Love this, Hilda! We see many sculptures destroyed, better it is paper. More to explore in this ingenious poem! Fave for me!
Greenhough Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 7:00 AM
Thank you for reading this poem. Thank you for the fave. By the way, there is a famous Japanese Origami artist who creates lasting paper art. Not all paper blows away.
George Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:09 AM
I enjoyed the wisdom in this, dear Hilda. If busts of people in great fame are made in metal or in concrete, it is difficult to break them when they fall out of the favor of people. Fame is transitory.
Greenhough Avatar
August 8, 2024 at 5:50 AM
Oh, I like statues because they are art. I try to covey that there is unfounded talent that never succeeds for various reasons. Some just blow away.thank you for visiting.
Crandall Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 7:39 PM
Cool poem - I wonder if we're all origami -haha
Greenhough Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 7:41 PM
I'm glad you like my poem.
Empress Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 12:55 PM
Such a wise and profound poem, that is meaningful dear hilda! I love how youv ended it! Fame never lasts but in pursuit of fame so many go to extremes, it’s unbelievable today: but like everything in life fame too wanes. Pleasure reading you poem. I love the fact that you write on so many various subjects in such poetic manner. Sending you light always
Greenhough Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 1:46 PM
Thank you. These actually are all my poems. I imagine one could wonder. My brain is all over the place.
Hind Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 10:39 AM
An unusual opinion- I liked it <3
Greenhough Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 1:43 PM
Thank you. I did not want to sound mean. Fame has many reasons for failure. It's sad when it is caused by things beyond control.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 8:31 AM
All earthly things are short lived.
Greenhough Avatar
August 7, 2024 at 8:53 AM
Ha ha. The bad and the good. It's always nice to hear from you.
May Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 6:59 AM
Fame is fleeting, Nicelt penned
Greenhough Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 8:02 AM
Thank you for your comment.
Nicholsen Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 3:45 AM
Indeed fame is very short lived many blessings awesome write
Greenhough Avatar
August 6, 2024 at 6:34 AM
Thank you.
Wolf Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 8:28 PM
Love the subtle put-down of immortality implicit in your lines. So true that fame is fleeting...
Greenhough Avatar
August 5, 2024 at 8:45 PM
I hope I don't sound .mean. Some talent doesn't come to fruition. Perhaps the timing isn't right or there aren't enough resource. There are many reasons. Thank you for your comment.
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