Shortcomings

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If one doesn't like being criticized for his shortcomings in life let him find a way to eliminate them and thus end the strife! © Demetrios Trifiatis 12 August 2020

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/12/2020 5:03:00 AM

Yes indeed--they should try their best to overcome--good advice my friend. Nature at its best in your garden.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 9:43:00 AM

Vijay, my friend, it is always a pleasure to see you here. Thank you so much for your appreciative comment. Blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2020 4:37:00 AM

- Clear speech and is good advice ... excellent, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 9:41:00 AM

Dearest, Anne-Lise thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment. Hugs xxx

Michael Tor

Date: 8/12/2020 3:01:00 AM

We all can use improvement, for we are not perfect. Those of us that realize our flaws through others and come to a realization they are correct and take head, do much better then those that refuse to accept the criticism and continue in their misbehavior. Sound advice Demetrios one would be foolish not to take. Blessings my friend...

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 3:15:00 AM

Once more I thank you my friend, Michael for your analysis. Blessings

Jenish Somadas

Date: 8/12/2020 1:34:00 AM

True and great advice... I usually get crippled on criticism but bloom back eliminating the cause.. Wonderful write Demetrios..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 3:19:00 AM

You are one of the kind my dearest friend , Jenish! Thank you for commenting. Blessings

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/12/2020 1:24:00 AM

That is good advice Demetrios, I welcome criticism good or bad, if its bad hopefully I can make improvements and learn from my mistakes. Tom

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2020 3:18:00 AM

If only all of us welcomed well-meaning criticism my friend, Tom. Certainly we would have a better society. Thank you for your gracious visit and comment. Blessings