Short Verse Sort of Tanka

Short verse 
Brother wind, sister rain,
Father thunder and mother sunlight
Meet every April
And a family feud breaks out.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gorelick Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 6:35 PM
I love this storm! Great poem! BG
Hansen Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 6:43 AM
thank you barbara
Collins Avatar
May 16, 2013 at 6:02 PM
Boom! I love it.
Hansen Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 6:43 AM
thank you Kathy
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