Short Trip

I'm saving it all down to my last nickel
For for a trip that may sound to you radical.
Recycling my cans
And planning my plans
I'm about to take a short sabbatical.

I pack all my stuff in the car
Including my gas money jar
It's a full as can be,
A whole buck ninety-three.
It's okay, I'm not going very far.

About one mile out of town I start yearnin'
Last year I went three (seems I'm learning)
I say, "Aww phooey!"
And then flip a U-ey
'Cause the best part of vacation is returnin'.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
May 7, 2011 at 12:19 PM
This one is a hoot. REALLY clever one, Congratulations on your win.
George   Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 4:13 AM
Light-hearted and fun trip, Jason. Thank you for the journey. Many congrats on your WIN, Lainie
Onclaud Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 7:52 PM
happy congrast to you for the great win, jason! lovely! :) huggs
Freeman Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 6:18 PM
Jason, Great to see you poem's success in the winner's circle. Congratulations on your honored poem's place. Agape, Moses
Taylor Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Congrats on your win, Jason. Nice going. Ralph
Sweetheart Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 1:32 PM
Congrats Jason on your fantastic win in the vacation contest with this fine adventure ..enjoy your win with luv..
Devonshire Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 1:07 PM
Wow, you're a great limerick writer, Jason. Wish you had entered some of the limerick contests I hosted in the past. You had me laughing out loud through the whole poem. Congratulations on your win in Carol's contest. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 12:17 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of carol, Jason
Brown Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 12:03 PM
Congratulations Jason on your 9th place win in my "It's Time For A Vacation" contest. Thank you for supporting my contest. Love, Carol
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