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Short and Sweet

writers p u r s u e verbosity ~ readers d e s i r e brevity
[Brevette form] The Brevette, created by Emily Romano consists of a subject (noun), verb, and object (noun), in this exact order. The verb should show an ongoing action. This is done by spacing out the letters in the verb. There are only three words in the poem, giving it the title Brevette. Written 30 Oct 2020
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Dietrich Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 3:07 PM
now that was a well deserved POtd AS WELL!!! cONGRATS.
Watt Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 3:44 PM
Thank you for all the wonderful comments today, my friend! Enjoy your day ~ John
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November 4, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Congratulations on the p.o.t.d. win. You did a wonderful write. Your sign about a short life is so true but many do not made it sweet. Have a wonderful day with your win.................
Watt Avatar
November 4, 2020 at 8:23 PM
Hi Paula, thank you for the congrats and kind words. Enjoy your day ~ John
Proxenos Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 10:06 AM
What a wonderful description of a Brevette form of poetry, congratulations on your great win my friend. Truly deserved. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Watt Avatar
November 3, 2020 at 11:03 AM
I so appreciate the congrats and blessings (and hugs!) from my dear South African poetry friend!
Onclaud Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 6:15 PM
right you are, john...greeat verse worthy of a fine win... congrats with huggs
Watt Avatar
November 2, 2020 at 8:35 PM
Thanks for the lovely comment and congrats, Nette!
Evans Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 1:00 PM
Congrats on your win... very well done...
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, Marilene!
Romios Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 12:40 PM
Belated congtraulations, John. Appreciate the notes on the Brevette. Pangie xx
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:45 PM
Thank you, my dear friend. And thanks for the Soup mail too ~ John
Andresen Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 6:41 AM
- Congratulations on the p.o.t.d. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Thank you my smiling sunshine friend! Hugs ~ John
Ermine Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 3:55 AM
Massive Congratulations, Emile. I thoroughly agree with all your Soup supporters. Deeply nourishing poem. Thank you for your truths.
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 7:44 PM
Hi Sigrid, I think you intended this for Emile and fell victim to the PS glitch that sends POTD messages to the previous day's POTD. Cheers, John (Watt)
Radice Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 1:57 AM
As clever as it is excellent :)
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 3:52 AM
Thanks, Gary. Enjoy your November ~ John
Buhagiar Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 11:45 PM
Congratulations for your POTD.
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 12:37 AM
Thank you, my friend ~ John
Roper Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 10:25 PM
Congratulations on POTD and your win in Joseph contest, John,
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 12:37 AM
Thank you for both, dear Eve. Hugs ~ John
Mitra Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:38 PM
So little yet so much.....short and sweet as with the latter... Congrats on your win John :)
Watt Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 12:37 AM
Thank you, Carol. I appreciate your visit.
Crabtree Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 6:42 PM
Well said, John. Congratulations on the poem of the day :)
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:27 PM
Thank you for coming by today to wish me your congrats. I appreciate your kindness, Angie. Enjoy your November ~ John
Nicole Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 5:58 PM
As I have stated many times- sometimes less is so much more. You have succeeded my dear friend. :) As one reading words of another, I want to breathe in every emotion. To feel each moment. "Short and Sweet" The title alone is captivating- well, it is to me anyway. Congratulations John, on Poem of the Day. :) Hugs, Brandy
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:27 PM
Yes, less is more. I am still learning that valuable lesson, my friend. This poem was a reminder to myself to keep that in mind when I write. You are always so kind to encourage the POTD winners, Brandy. Thank you for that, and for being you. Enjoy your November ~ John
Wolf Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 5:45 PM
Excellent, John! Congrats on POTD ~ In my briefs, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 6:57 AM
Like Jerry Rice you go long?! -- Then you can't go wrong!... Ready with the gong?! lol. Congrats again, my friend. Happy Sunday! :) gw
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:31 PM
In writing poetry, I tend to be like a wide receiver on a Hail Mary play. I go long. ~ Jerry Rice
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:24 PM
Modestly looking away, Gershon. Briefly yours, John (seriously, thanks for the visit and kind words my friend!)
Romios Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:21 PM
Doll Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 4:51 PM
John, congratulations on POTD, Best Wishes~ Warren
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Very nice to see you today, Warren. Thanks for the congrats ~ John
James Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 3:53 PM
Congratulations on your POTD John, Emilia : )
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Thank you, so kind of you to drop in Emilia!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 3:44 PM
So true! Congratulations, John! Also on POTD!
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:21 PM
Double thanks, my dear friend! God bless ~ John
Koplin Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 3:42 PM
Very clever write John! Congratulations on your honor of POTD!!
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:21 PM
Thank you, my friend. Very good of you to stop by today. God bless ~ John
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October 31, 2020 at 3:41 PM
Short and sweet, the words say it all. Well done John on poem of the week... Belle
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:20 PM
If only all my poems could be so short and sweet! Still working on that... Thanks, Belle!
Kitchin Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 3:28 PM
John, congratulations on POTD, enjoyed!
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:20 PM
Nice to see you here today, my friend! Thank you for dropping by ~ John
Allison Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 2:33 PM
dropping back again John to say many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:19 PM
In the baseball world we call this a triple play. How about a hat trick (football or hockey)? You are so good to me, my dear friend. Have a lovely November! Hugs ~ John
La France Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 2:26 PM
John, congratulations on receiving POTD with this wonderful write _Constance
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:16 PM
Thanks for the thoughtful congrats and sweet words, my friend ~ John
Radhakrishna Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 2:17 PM
congrats on your POTD! brevity the soul of poetry too!
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:16 PM
Thank you for the visit, Krish! Blessings, my friend ~ John
May Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 1:02 PM
Very nicely done John, Congrats on your win..
Watt Avatar
October 31, 2020 at 9:15 PM
Grateful for the contest and lovely placement, Joseph. Have a blessed November ~ John
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