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Shore To Rise

fiery sun emerges from dark sea seashells scattered about litter the beach as dolphins tumble in capped waves tips of white froth caress gray sand lone footprints fade june 19,2019

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John Hamilton

Date: 6/24/2019 10:00:00 AM

Wonderful words that describe loneliness amidst the beauty of the seashore, you have a distinct style which is so appealing!

Sandra Adams
Date: 6/24/2019 10:22:00 AM

Thank you John, I think I wrote this for a contest and then decided not to enter it....it's been awhile since my muse has sang so if i find an inspiration i act on it! The ocean is my favorite place to be, I am a couple hours from it but go as often as i can! I caught the dolphins playing at sunrise on video! I find walking at sunrise on an almost empty beach is so relaxing, so much beauty to see!

John Gondolf

Date: 6/21/2019 7:45:00 AM

I've always enjoyed the solitude of walking along the beach in early morning; this poem took me there, Sandra. I love the simplicity of this. John

Sandra Adams
Date: 6/21/2019 8:39:00 AM

I love walking along the beach at sunrise as well and i actually caught his scene on video with my phone one morning! Thank you for your comment and visit :)

Craig Cornish

Date: 6/20/2019 1:38:00 PM

Loving the simplicity that births deep thought

Sandra Adams
Date: 6/20/2019 2:25:00 PM

thank you! i was going to enter it in the imagism contest but didn't feel it was what the host was looking for, but I like how it turned out regardless Sometimes simple is more~