Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

- Shopping Time - Plastic Card -

First time ....
                                               Back in the pocket
                                                The second time ....
                                                    Up in the bag
                                                     Third time ....
                                             Starting to feel the heat
                                                   Fourth time ....
                                               Down in the handbag
                                                    The fifth time ....
                                                     I'm a little tired
                                                       Sixth time ....
                                             Once again into the pocket
                                                      Seventh time .....
                                                  I soon start to glow
                                                       Eigth time ....
                                            Once again into the handbag
                                                        Ninth time ....
                                                   Now I'm really hot
                                                  Tenth time .... (Phu...)
                                                    Now I am: EMPTY !
                                         There are busy times for "plastic card"





05.12.2012
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Debbie Guzzi January 11, 2013 at 4:05 PM A pleasure to read your work this evening. Light & Love Anne-Lise Andresen January 12, 2013 at 5:29 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan January 5, 2013 at 3:21 AM This is very cute, and true ;} Have a blessed New Years Anne xoxo ;} Anne-Lise Andresen January 5, 2013 at 11:35 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gwendolen Song December 30, 2012 at 4:11 PM hee hee hee hee..u gave that plastic card an incredible work out, Anne Lise! Wishing u and Arild a very awesome New Yr and lots of new poems to share! Love and prayers always, gwendolen Anne-Lise Andresen December 31, 2012 at 3:41 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments, Gwen. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Don Johnson December 21, 2012 at 3:20 AM plastic cards are surely buzzing, money burning on the line, stand back little cuzzin, dollars gone and it was mine :) Anne-Lise Andresen December 21, 2012 at 10:29 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments, Don. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carol Eastman December 18, 2012 at 12:49 PM Great read... I've solved that problem... If I don't have the cash... I don't go shopping. This year the TV broke down so my Hubby is doing the shopping (for the new TV) for one big family gift... Actually it'll be a small TV, but it'll give a lot of family time, no matter the size. LOL... Anne-Lise Andresen December 18, 2012 at 12:57 PM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. Carol - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gail Debole December 17, 2012 at 5:45 AM Hi Anne Lise - Very unique! Love this. Happy Holidays and taking for visiting my poetry. - Love to you, Gail Anne-Lise Andresen December 17, 2012 at 7:42 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart December 9, 2012 at 6:47 AM very well written for all 'plastic' users during holiday spending time Anne-Lise .. my hubby is secretly storing mine away ..haha .. but he forgot about online cybershopping ...oh .. was so happy to read your comment inspired Craig for next theme for his contest .. great how we inspire each other luv .. Anne-Lise Andresen December 9, 2012 at 6:51 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot Linda-Marie, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux December 8, 2012 at 7:08 AM I think this poem is very clever. Well done. Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2012 at 7:10 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh December 7, 2012 at 10:14 PM I like your take on the expression "money burning a hole in your pocket" With plastic it's a lot harder to see until you get the bill. Anne-Lise Andresen December 8, 2012 at 2:33 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Holly Moore December 7, 2012 at 10:45 AM That's clever. It will burn a hole in your pocket or your purse! Thanks for your comments on my poem...Hugs, Holly Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2012 at 11:13 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments Holly....lol. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Daver Austin December 7, 2012 at 8:56 AM That's a lot to put on a poor old plastic card. Enjoyed mucho. daver Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2012 at 11:13 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison December 7, 2012 at 6:19 AM Funny write but really hits home at the time of the year! Loved it... hugs, Jack xox Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2012 at 6:22 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman December 7, 2012 at 5:39 AM i always think about the ones at the other end of the transaction, waiting there like Oliver Twist, "Please can i have more" a gem of a poem is this, the theme is today, and that like this poem is awesome.... Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2012 at 5:43 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments Harry. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 7, 2012 at 1:50 AM can I come shopping with you , your card gets more use than mine lol xx Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2012 at 5:01 AM ...My is empty !!! Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

S.Jagathsimhan Nair December 7, 2012 at 1:25 AM Very interesting, Anne, way to go!! Jag Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2012 at 1:33 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Yanny Widjanarko December 6, 2012 at 9:50 PM This is really creative poem Anne, Christmas is the time when the plastic card in action, but becareful for the burnt bill :D Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2012 at 12:30 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams December 6, 2012 at 4:04 PM Anne-Lise back for a re-read because my plastic is now on meltdown.....David Anne-Lise Andresen December 7, 2012 at 12:29 AM lol.... thank you for re-read,David. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo December 6, 2012 at 12:20 PM You know what/ i agree with you and now is the time. have a nice day. Lucilla Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2012 at 12:50 PM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop December 6, 2012 at 10:44 AM Ow dear you.gave me a chuckle :).This is my.first xmas not working in sake of my.newborn.My.husband's plastic card will.havr to do.Men usually buy.whar they need but we.buy what we like..oww gee.hehe Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2012 at 11:30 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas - at least not your husband's. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

The Situation December 6, 2012 at 8:51 AM This was halarious becaues I thought about how true it is. It had that something special that will make it one of my favs. Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2012 at 10:01 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams December 6, 2012 at 5:13 AM Anne-Lise very well done, you should enter this in Frank's personification contest...David Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2012 at 5:27 AM Thank you for the recommendation, David ..... but he never read my poems. - Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer December 5, 2012 at 6:45 PM ha! very true and very well-said! Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2012 at 2:17 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Audrey Haick December 5, 2012 at 6:16 PM : ) Now you can put your feet up and rest, dear Anne Lise! lol! Can't help but laugh! Great write. Love, Annalise Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2012 at 2:17 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joanmarie Peranteau December 5, 2012 at 5:18 PM Enjoyed that poem, made me laugh, especially because I can relate. Thank you for the laugh. Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2012 at 2:16 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich December 5, 2012 at 4:09 PM haha ,what an original idea for personification. I LOVE your cleverness. Anne-Lise Andresen December 6, 2012 at 2:16 AM Thank you for visiting my poem, appreciate your comments. - Do not let your "plastic card" go hot, now before Christmas. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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