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Shop Talk (A Sonnet)

Ka-chunk, ka-chunk, ka-chunk, ka-chunk a shear blade stricking sheet metal, ka-chunk. Cah-tink, cah-tink, cah-tink, cah-tink, cah-tink a press pierces, notches and holes, cah-tink Cha-boom, cha-boom, cha-boom, cha-boom, cha-boom. Breaks form ninties on a blank sheet, cha-boom. Zzzizz-zit, zzzizz-zit, zzzizz-zit, zzzizz-zit, zzzizz-zit, The welder fills open corners, zzzizz-zit Ssz-oowh, ssz-oowh, ssz-oowh, ssz-oowh, ssz-oowh, A band saw cuts through copper tube, ssz-oowh. Whirrr-fha, whirrr-fha, whirrr-fha, whirrr-fha, whrrrm-fha Radial saws glide through steel rods, whirrr-fha. Ka-chunk, cah-tink,cha-boom,zzzizz-zit, ssz-oowh, Sounds of industry in a plant I know.

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Date: 8/13/2009 1:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with a very creative poem! It fit the write contest.
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Date: 8/12/2009 5:13:00 PM
Well done, Bill! How will you handle all this glory? Enjoy your chocolates!
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Date: 8/12/2009 12:26:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Matt's contest Bill.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/11/2009 12:59:00 PM
Familiar sounds to you. Unbelievably descriptive to us. congratulations on your Joyce
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Date: 8/11/2009 8:10:00 AM
So original, ....so clever! Congratulations on this 2nd place winning poem!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 8/11/2009 6:34:00 AM
Great sounds! Now I know how to capture sounds in words! I had never seen so many interesting word sounds before reading your poem. Good job and congrats on your 2nd placement. Krista
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Date: 8/11/2009 5:10:00 AM
Contratulations, Bill for winning 2nd place in the New Terrains Contest. I love the sound effects. It is a well deserved win. Sincerely, Dane Smith-Johnsen
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Date: 8/10/2009 11:16:00 PM
Congrats on placing second in the contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/10/2009 10:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd place! Great job! Trudy
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Date: 8/10/2009 9:08:00 PM
very interesting so much sound, congrats on your placement!
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Date: 7/24/2009 12:05:00 PM
Bill, This reminds me of Disneys industrial symphony from the WWII era. I can almost believe that I am in this shop. Sheer elegance my friend and a lot of fun to boot. Always, Will
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