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Shooting Star

Admiring one another from afar Your fantasy inspired my light to shine You were the moon, I was a shooting star Recalling now when paths of ours entwined I danced with your reflection on the tides Played hide and seek with shadows in the trees You looked my way as I came passing by To flash a smile at me seductively It saddens me to think how few our days My love for you I'll keep for times of doubt I'm grateful that we met along the way Once old stars flash, how quickly they burn out If future stars should pass this way again Remember when we laughed and danced as friends An original poem by the "Poemdog" Daniel Turner

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/12/2016 5:01:00 AM

Great write, Daniel:) Hope you get better soon:)

Tom Quigley

Date: 6/8/2016 5:32:00 PM

A beautiful write and a sad one. Be well and I hope to hear from you again.

Jean Murray

Date: 6/6/2016 5:08:00 PM

Divine reminising Daniel. Was missing you. Keep 'em comin'.

Sandra Haight

Date: 6/6/2016 1:19:00 PM

So nice to read another poem of yours, Daniel. A beautiful Sonnet indeed. Hope you are feeling better these days and be able to post more of your lovely writes. Sandra

Red Fiery

Date: 6/5/2016 9:50:00 PM

Brilliant as always..perfectly crafted work my friend..:) You were the moon, I was a shooting star...stupendous !A7 for this write ~Red~

Tim Smith

Date: 6/5/2016 8:51:00 PM

This is great DT my friend. What happened? I thought it was supposed to be last Tuesday. You are in my prayers.