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Shooting Star

Admiring one another from afar
Your fantasy inspired my light to shine
You were the moon, I was a shooting star
Recalling now when paths of ours entwined

I danced with your reflection on the tides
Played hide and seek with shadows in the trees
You looked my way as I came passing by
To flash a smile at me seductively

It saddens me to think how few our days
My love for you I'll keep for times of doubt
I'm grateful that we met along the way
Once old stars flash, how quickly they burn out

If future stars should pass this way again
Remember when we laughed and danced as friends


    An original poem by the "Poemdog" Daniel Turner

Copyright © Daniel Turner | Year Posted 2016

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Joanna Daniel Date: 6/12/2016 5:01:00 AM Great write, Daniel:) Hope you get better soon:) Login to Reply

Tom Quigley Date: 6/8/2016 5:32:00 PM A beautiful write and a sad one. Be well and I hope to hear from you again. Login to Reply

Jean Murray Date: 6/6/2016 5:08:00 PM Divine reminising Daniel. Was missing you. Keep 'em comin'. Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 6/6/2016 1:19:00 PM So nice to read another poem of yours, Daniel. A beautiful Sonnet indeed. Hope you are feeling better these days and be able to post more of your lovely writes. Sandra Login to Reply

Red Fiery Date: 6/5/2016 9:50:00 PM Brilliant as always..perfectly crafted work my friend..:) You were the moon, I was a shooting star...stupendous !A7 for this write ~Red~ Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 6/5/2016 8:51:00 PM This is great DT my friend. What happened? I thought it was supposed to be last Tuesday. You are in my prayers. Login to Reply