Shooting Star

The four lane road spreads out in front of the car
As the silver moon dances close to the northern star

Six shades of darkness are painted across the sky
Difficult to admit something that has always been a lie

In the space between heaven and earth
We tend to decide what we are worth

Never realizing that others see us as we truly are
Leaving us confused as we find it a little bizarre

To think that we may have some value is rough
When we have always thought ourselves to be bitter and tough

Finding one’s own way amidst the rocks and trees
Can change your opinion of yourself slowly by degrees

Till an admission can be made to all that have been had
That I am better that I was and I have no reason to be sad

A shooting star crosses the sky in front of the car, burning bright
Reminding me that even though I made a lot of bad decisions, the last one I 
made was right
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Brown Avatar
July 22, 2008 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Christian. Love, Carol
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July 21, 2008 at 1:37 PM
Nice use of rhyme and imagery to forward your message. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. Keep up the good writing. Best wishes. Karen
Jordan Avatar
July 21, 2008 at 10:48 AM
Christian - wonderful flow and rhyme - message was clear - congrats on being featured
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July 21, 2008 at 7:36 AM
Congrats Christian on the featuring of your poem "Shooting Star." Vince
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July 20, 2008 at 4:54 PM
A beautiful, introspective write. Congratulations Christian on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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