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Shooting Star

From far across the dark of space You start your long celestial race I think about the sights you’ll see As you travel across the galaxy Past constellations deep and bright You float amidst the clear starlight Drifting along the Milky Way Watching the shining moonbeams play Traveling beyond the distant stars Past Saturn, Jupiter, and Mars While I am here and sound asleep You’re moving on through space so deep Until you reach the planet earth Far from the realm that gave you birth Your trip will soon be ending here As you fall into the atmosphere A streak of light across night sky You burn so bright then quickly die How is it that you've come so far Oh brightly shining shooting star?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/5/2010 12:02:00 PM
Beautiful entryCongratulations on your win with this delightful poem. Love, joyce
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Date: 10/4/2010 8:54:00 PM
what a cool descriptive poem for a comet. This is very nice, Congratulations, Stephen. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:52:00 AM
Conmgratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Stephen
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Date: 10/4/2010 4:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Stephen in Barbara Gorelick's contest "Heaven's Sake". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:53:00 PM
Congrats Stephen on your super win in BG's contest with this great write... enjoy another win today with luv..
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Date: 10/3/2010 6:34:00 PM
Congrats on your win in my contest..wonderful job. BG
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Date: 9/29/2010 12:26:00 PM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Stephen. Love, Carol
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