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Shooting Star

Attractive and luminous, Burning on your golden path Like an adamant against the sun. Symbolising every entity, Caught up in spontaneity Perusing the conscientious. Uninspired to aspire Yet inspiring the phenomenal, As they claim all of what you grant. During your death, they wield smiles Making wishes of a lifetime While you dance in cosmic time.

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Date: 1/22/2025 9:53:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Polen Chongo
Date: 1/27/2025 12:48:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 11/20/2024 6:00:00 AM
Awesome take on a shooting star Polen!
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Polen Chongo
Date: 11/21/2024 8:24:00 AM
Thanks Tom Woody

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