Shooting Star

shooting star across my sky ~ renewed hope AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on July 17, 2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/18/2020 2:29:00 AM

The last line has the punch you always talk about; for sure!

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2020 9:31:00 AM

Thank you, Caren.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/17/2020 5:44:00 PM

Bullseye! And a real positive shot in the arm as well! Thanks, Line. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2020 9:31:00 AM

Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated ~

Edward Ibeh

Date: 7/17/2020 3:41:00 PM

Lovely, Line, real lovely:-)

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2020 9:32:00 AM

Thanks Edward ~

P.M. Richter

Date: 7/17/2020 12:40:00 PM

Wonderful haiku Line ~ I love it. Always keeping an eye out for those shooting stars.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2020 9:32:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, PM.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 7/17/2020 12:02:00 PM

Short and sweet. I always feel blessed when I see one. xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/18/2020 9:33:00 AM

Thanks, Maureen, for your much appreciated visit and comment~