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Shooting Skies and Fireflies...

the firefly sky dancing over the prairie with the shooting stars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/16/2009 11:01:00 PM
Ooh - The imagery here is wonderful.
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Date: 4/16/2009 7:05:00 AM
Such a lovely, sparkling image!! A perfect haiku!!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 4/15/2009 10:47:00 PM
Very nice haiku, loved it. Its very captivating. Aleera
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Date: 4/15/2009 8:58:00 PM
Luke, I hope you'll check out the picture of the sphinx in the link. The picture taken by the Viking satellite says more than words ever could.
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Date: 4/15/2009 8:46:00 PM
Wow, thinking of fireflies as shooting stars is an awesome image, Luke! Brilliant haiku! You deserve a round of applause for this one!
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