Shooting Skies and Fireflies...

the firefly sky 

dancing over the prairie

with the shooting stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Curcio Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 11:01 PM
Ooh - The imagery here is wonderful.
Richards Avatar
April 16, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Such a lovely, sparkling image!! A perfect haiku!!! Love, Carrie
De La Keur Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 10:47 PM
Very nice haiku, loved it. Its very captivating. Aleera
Devonshire Avatar
April 15, 2009 at 8:58 PM
Luke, I hope you'll check out the picture of the sphinx in the link. The picture taken by the Viking satellite says more than words ever could.
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April 15, 2009 at 8:46 PM
Wow, thinking of fireflies as shooting stars is an awesome image, Luke! Brilliant haiku! You deserve a round of applause for this one!
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