Shooting Death In the Street

fleeting moments in streets that fled the snares
even till they wink they kill sun or night

disheartening images left behind,  
unrespect youth  but outcast nothing fetched

ignorant truth doth give to discontent
need to get rid  that lords over their fears 

attend  to bridge the deep and outer self 
henceforth be the journey long and painful

to morrow plant newly sharpens love edge
war and violent hands shall nullify
 
mute the waste, light the way and hope for peace
that thou shalt comfort orphans left behind



12/2/201

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Date: 12/18/2016 10:46:00 PM
Wonderfully stated.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/18/2016 11:47:00 PM
Thank you, Afzal, something needs to happen to get rid of the guns on the street
Date: 12/7/2016 9:57:00 PM
Hi Eve. As Alexis said a Heart felt piece, I am afraid this is the world over these days and yes we do hope for peace but it certainly won't be in our time, I do tend to worry about my grandchildren and their future but as they say that is life, a 7 for this one my dear. Take care......Vera
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/7/2016 11:07:00 PM
I share your same feelings about my children and grandchildren. We can hope Hugs eve
Date: 12/4/2016 10:01:00 AM
Hi Eve, You've penned such a heartfelt piece. It's so sad to see our world in this state. However, I shall never tire of hoping for peace for our world.I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Well done. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2016 6:33:00 PM
Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration: ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
Date: 12/4/2016 7:45:00 AM
Much to ponder.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/5/2016 6:34:00 PM
Yes, Richard, Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
Date: 12/3/2016 7:53:00 PM
"hope for peace" seems like I've been hoping for peace all of my life, Mrs Eve. Lovely write:)
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/3/2016 9:11:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/3/2016 2:26:00 PM
heartfelt write with hope at the end
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/3/2016 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Jack
Date: 12/3/2016 9:20:00 AM
sent you soup mail
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Date: 12/3/2016 4:49:00 AM
Beautiful poem, hopeful too. Good luck in the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/3/2016 9:12:00 PM
Thank you, Darre. Hugs Eve
Date: 12/3/2016 12:14:00 AM
Yes, the repercussions are endless! Great write, Eve. And good luck!
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Eve Roper
Date: 12/3/2016 9:13:00 PM
Thank you, Rick. Hugs Eve
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