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Shooting Bottle Caps

Shooting bottle caps, ring finger off thumb. And a little cake - the two breaks in half, fixed with melting wax and lighter. Light years of 22 in impromptu breakfast party then the boy is parting for Tennessee, to see to making a few bucks. Toodeloos to Mom, Dad, Aunts, Uncles, a random cousin and a visitor. Who can refuse to fuse together; never knowing when this grouping will reoccur? Always a little drama, a smile, too many hugs (we huddle). Call me. I come. Gather the troops as todays don’t come around again, only the memories; and they fail to capture the whole snapshot - bottle caps bouncing off familial walls.

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Date: 5/27/2024 5:37:00 PM
The danger of the too familiar, left..."troops" I don't know, your work seems to suggest he's in for something.... your work is so versatile and moving....always a pleasure to read
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/27/2024 5:39:00 PM
Thank you, Paige. Happy for your visit!
Date: 5/27/2024 10:56:00 AM
Kim! A really lovely poem here about family and memories. I like the alliteration of "bottle caps bouncing", like memories and conversation bouncing off walls too. Have a great day xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/27/2024 1:09:00 PM
Thank you so much, Chris! I appreciate it!

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