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Shoot For the Moon

Shoot for the moon and even if you miss, you'll land among the stars Show me a glint of light from the moon and I will show you hope Her beauty and her elegance is never marred Show me a glimpse of her glow and I will show you love Her titan strength is in her luminous glare Show me the stars and I will understand the moon if I shoot for the moon and land on the stars, that's ok.

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Irfanulla Shariff

Date: 9/18/2022 12:31:00 PM

Yes, if we shoot for the moon, but we land on the stars, that is still Ok. Remarkable visualization. Well envisioned and nicely crafted poem. Thanks for sharing, Rose.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/18/2022 5:29:00 PM

Nice to have a choice between moon and stars, good heavens they were made for our enjoyment, Irfanulla thanks for reading

Rico Leffanta

Date: 9/18/2022 11:34:00 AM

That is certainly where the money will be (if that shuttle ever gets off the ground)! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/18/2022 5:28:00 PM

I am sure it will soon someday, until then keep reaching for the stars but keep your feet firmly planted, thanks for reading

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/18/2022 7:35:00 AM

For sure, Mystic Rose, we are not limited to earth, our reach...nor the stars for that matter. Heaven can be a living reality when in harmony. Great read! Blessings!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/18/2022 5:27:00 PM

I agree Joe we have no limits as long as we don't self impose them, thanks for dropping in,

Michael Tor

Date: 9/18/2022 5:53:00 AM

We should always shoot for the moon Dear Poetess. You captured a great vision and act to do. Thanks for sharing Vie...

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/18/2022 5:27:00 PM

I spend more time looking up than anywhere else, its where hope lies dear Michael, thanks for reading

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/18/2022 5:19:00 AM

It's a big celebration up there. No matter where, it is still heavenly. Enjoyed the voice of your poem, Vienna.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/18/2022 5:26:00 PM

Thank you, we can never go wrong when we look up to the moon and the stars