Shogun Collab Bill's Side Part 5 With Richard Pickett -Taz- Poetry

.After Bill left the station, he made a pit stop down to the local diner, parked his car and 
hurried in to get some much needed chow.
     “ What’s  up stranger? Haven’t seen your lanky frame in this fine dining establishment in 
forever” she said  saracastically  as she poured him a cup of old   left over breakfast 
coffee.  “Made this pot special just for you Bill, after I saw you crossing the street to come 
in here.”
     “Sure you did, Nette. I can tell by the grounds floating on top. I missed you too, he 
grinned. 
     “I take it you had a good trip…welcome back cowboy .You want the usual steak and 
eggs?” She didn’t wait for his answer as she wrote something on the order pad, spun around 
and hollered out to the kitchen. “Dead cow..rare and chicken innards Charlie!” 
     “You always make that sound so appetizing, Nette.” She smiled her welcome at him and 
headed off to grab another order. ” I’m comin’, I’m comin’, I ain’t your mother, ya know! 
Bill chowed down, left a tip and drove to the police horse stables to see his patrol partner. 
When he got there Gail, one of the stable grooms had Redneck on the cross ties lavishing 
him with attention that could only be given by someone who was dedicated to these trusty 
warm bloods. Redneck pricked his ears forward and whinnied a greeting to Bill before  Gail 
knew he was there.
    “Hello Redneck ole buddy! What would you do without Gail spoiling the heck out of you 
here?”   Bill scrubbed his forelock and patted his chest while thanking Gail for taking care of 
him while Bill was away.
    “ No problem Bill. Glad to do it. You know that. He’s my buddy too you know. Glad to see 
you’re  back.” They exchanged pleasantries and Bill headed back to his apartment to get a 
some much needed rest.
     The next morning found Bill refreshed and chomping at the bit to get the scoop on  
Brick’s  mystery murder  case. He decided to give Brick a call early before he headed out. ( 
To be cont. on Richard Pickett site "the team up")

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/11/2010 3:48:00 PM
Good story...Maybe the continuation will be soon..Sara
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Date: 12/11/2010 1:37:00 PM
Don't want to sound like a broken record but ahh... what's the site Rob? We want more; we want more (((hands pounding on the teble)))... Lay = )
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Date: 12/11/2010 12:44:00 PM
Enjoyed this so far Robert! I will catch up on the story at Richard's site? I see Carolyn's asked about the address of the site..if what she has is correct, pls sm me. Thanks. Have a beautiful weekend with family! Love, Audrey
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Date: 12/11/2010 10:44:00 AM
Robert, where is the rest? Come on now hehe.. Thanks for the laughs with your comment, now all we need is the balloon! Enjoy the anticipation you create with each instalment.. Enjoy the weekend ;)
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Date: 12/11/2010 10:40:00 AM
Hey, Rob, I really like this story. What's the link to Richard's site? www.theteamup.com ? Best wishes, Carolyn
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