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Shoes of Red Lace

I wish I could forget the night of my disgrace, when on stage I wore shoes fashioned of red lace. I took the role of seductress and played the part. When I cheated on him I crushed his loving heart. In my scarlet heels I became a brazen flirt, kissing actors in love scenes that left him hurt. What a foolish twit I was on the night I strayed. My shoes were not worth the high price I paid. I made a fool of myself with each step I took. By wearing sexy shoes I was baiting my hook. But they gave me blisters and pinched my toes. On opening night I became the thorn on his rose. I burned those shoes and watched the smoke rise, as tears and mascara streaked my actress eyes. I'm haunted by the scene in which I wore those shoes. Instead of rousing applause, I deserved taunting boos.
* * * * * * August 27th 2016
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Inman Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 8:06 AM
A wonderful metaphor for an adulteress, I must admit it doesn't surprise me when I hear of Hollywood romances going awry. I find it difficult to believe anyone can truly separate movie from reality when they are fulfilling their fantasies on screen, no matter what they try to tell themselves (It's acting). Great write Lin.
Lane Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:05 PM
Thanks so much for reading and commenting, James. I always appreciate your visits.
Haight Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 7:53 PM
Wonderful and imaginative, Lin! Congrats on your fine placement in the contest! Hugs, Sandra
Lane Avatar
September 21, 2016 at 12:04 PM
I apologize for not seeing this sooner. I haven't been around much lately, but I thank you very much, Sandra. As always, your comments are valued.
Dietrich Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Very creative approach to "my shoes" BIG congrats on your win. I sure enjoyed seeing this one, my friend.
Lane Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 4:52 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea. I enjoy seeing YOU here! ;-)
Walker Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 11:29 AM
Lin, watch out for those shoes of red lace! Congratulations on your 'naughty' poem placement. The rhyming is fun to read. All the best, Sonia
Lane Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 4:51 PM
I never owned a pair like these, lol. Thanks Sonia.
Allison Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Lin:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 8:33 AM
Oh, I see why the congrats. Right back at you for the Mooooey write on the bovine. haha
Godwin Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:15 PM
Darn, but your imagination can bring it up and put it down in ways that simply awe me. Great fantasy write ... CayCay
Lane Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 6:12 PM
I sure do like the way you phrase your comments! lol Thank you for these great compliments, CayCay.
Daniel Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 2:04 AM
Wow! Now this is what is called as storytelling:) astounding piece:) I don't know about that actress but you sure deserve the "rousing applause":):):)
Lane Avatar
August 29, 2016 at 7:04 AM
lol Jo. Thank you and please feel free to write my movie reviews anytime!
Raven Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:00 PM
Hi Lin, these excellent writes just seem to flow from your pen. Who needs shoes when you dance in the stars. This write has such emotional content that i know i shall always find in your writes Lin. The tears can fall as one reads the beauty in the sadness. You always manage to put beauty in the sadness. Kick off those shoes and come into my arms, we dance in the stars. A definite seven and a fave. Love....Mike. XX
Lane Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 7:24 AM
My shoes are off, Mike. Let's dance! thanks for such a sweet list of compliments.
Turner Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:23 PM
Forget it! I'll dance with you barefoot! Your usual everyday run of the mill super write, Lin. must be boring by now to be so good! You made me smile:)
Lane Avatar
August 28, 2016 at 7:25 AM
oh, Danny. That really is funny!
Turner Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 9:13 PM
No. I did not read it until you mentioned it. Now that's funny!
Lane Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 4:54 PM
;-) you read my reply to Charlie. Thank you, Danny, for such an endearing comment. You made me smile as well.
Nance Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 1:46 PM
What a powerful and incredible write of imagery, the scene and the shot, well done for the audience applause. :)
Lane Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 2:29 PM
Thank you, Cas. lol Love the way you adapted your comment to the play.
Smith Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 12:32 PM
More of a flip flop sort of guy myself but can relate to the pain...
Lane Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 2:28 PM
I don't even like flip-flops, Charlie. I'm a barefoot kinda woman. Thanks.
Quigley Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 10:24 AM
Great write! Nice to read you again!
Lane Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 2:25 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. Nice to see you.
Babbit Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 8:54 AM
Neat tale, never owned red shoes but like Dorothy, may they always take us home. Good luck in the contest.
Lane Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 2:24 PM
Thank you a bunch, DMB!
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 8:28 AM
Gosh Lin what a tale of betrayal - glad you ditched the shoes...note to self not to wear my red lace shoes when I'm on stage in November lol:-)good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 11:18 AM
No lol I'll be reciting a couple of poems in front of an audience of about 800 people if the charity gig is sold out:-)
Lane Avatar
August 27, 2016 at 8:31 AM
Are you playing role of Scarlet O'Hara? lol Thanks, Jan.
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