Shoe Rack



Stan silently looked at reeboks
Hoping they had no arch  
Oxfords are great walking shoe choice
Except tennis-shoes comfort would be keen
 

7/9/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Agustin Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 8:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this, making me smile while remembering our kids' shoe preferences. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments, and my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you. (By the way, I still read your poems from the book you sent me to our special child, and he keeps on clapping with glee.)
Roper Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 8:26 PM
You just brightened my day, thank you.
Kendrick Avatar
July 13, 2024 at 7:50 AM
Good one. Seems like there was a contest going on where it had beginning of the sentence and end saying something. If it is for the contest, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara K
Buhagiar Avatar
July 10, 2024 at 2:05 AM
Your acrostic is lovely. Pity it was not for the contest. Hugs.
Dietrich Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 3:10 PM
Cute one. Was it in that one acrostic contest that closed last week?
Roper Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 4:49 PM
yes, it was. Had to do another because I just had it wrong
Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 1:03 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun "Shoe Rack" Acrostic write. Have a fun day writing away............
Anaya Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 11:33 AM
So many choices, it's better to stick with what we know. A perfect acoustic, theme and cleverly done Eve. :)
Empress Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 10:29 AM
This is so unique and well crafted dear eve. You did this acrostic very well! Loved it! I would prefer comfort over everything else anytime. Sending you light always
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