Shoe Rack

Stan silently looked at reeboks Hoping they had no arch Oxfords are great walking shoe choice Except tennis-shoes comfort would be keen 7/9/2024

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/16/2024 8:00:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this, making me smile while remembering our kids' shoe preferences. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments, and my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you. (By the way, I still read your poems from the book you sent me to our special child, and he keeps on clapping with glee.)

Eve Roper
Date: 7/16/2024 8:26:00 PM

You just brightened my day, thank you.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/13/2024 7:50:00 AM

Good one. Seems like there was a contest going on where it had beginning of the sentence and end saying something. If it is for the contest, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us and for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara K

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/10/2024 2:05:00 AM

Your acrostic is lovely. Pity it was not for the contest. Hugs.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/9/2024 3:10:00 PM

Cute one. Was it in that one acrostic contest that closed last week?

Eve Roper
Date: 7/9/2024 4:49:00 PM

yes, it was. Had to do another because I just had it wrong

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/9/2024 1:03:00 PM

I enjoyed reading your fun "Shoe Rack" Acrostic write. Have a fun day writing away............

I Am Anaya

Date: 7/9/2024 11:33:00 AM

So many choices, it's better to stick with what we know. A perfect acoustic, theme and cleverly done Eve. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 7/9/2024 10:29:00 AM

This is so unique and well crafted dear eve. You did this acrostic very well! Loved it! I would prefer comfort over everything else anytime. Sending you light always