Shock Begins

The close family was all called in Four days since hubby to home had been The snooker hustler played High stakes for which he stayed In the door he came, our shock begins
Written: May 13, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Horne Avatar
March 22, 2019 at 3:08 PM
ha ha, had a chuckle
A   Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 12:25 AM
Sara,, :) Congratulations, on your win. "Luv Linda"
George   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Good One Sara. Many congrat's on your win. Elaine
Hamilton Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 7:39 AM
funny limerick Sara congrats on win hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 8:40 AM
Congratulations Sara.
A  Avatar
June 8, 2014 at 7:33 AM
Sara,, Congrats, on your "Bawdy, Bawdy, Bawdy, Miss Clawdy" win........ Enjoyable Limerick :) LOVE ~SKAT~
Mehta Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 9:54 PM
Congratulations on your fine win with this well humored limerick, sara
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 9:52 PM
Congratulations for your win, Sara.
Johnson Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 6:01 PM
Win or lose? That is the question. You may notice, I have no other suggestion. :) Peace.
Devonshire Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 3:42 PM
Dear Sara, How worried a family would be if the patriarch stayed away to gamble. The shock would soon turn to relief, but he'd have a lot of explaining to do! If this is for the limerick contest, I wish you success! It's always a pleasure to read your words, my friend. Love, Carolyn
A   Avatar
May 14, 2014 at 11:13 AM
I like the limerick, Sara.... not the kind of shock i was thinking of... hope all is well... Linda
Dietrich Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Sara. I am not completely sure, but maybe line 3 is not in the rules of the syllable count. I know we can use six syllables. Not sure of 7!
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