Shock After 6 Months

Shock after 6 months

Pure love filled two souls.
They wed, hoped eternity...
First X-wife not X...

©  Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
     January 14, 2010

Inspired by Poetry soup member contest Betrayal 	
Sponsored by: Olusegun Adelan

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Audrey Haick

Date: 1/15/2010 9:08:00 AM

Good entry for Adelana's "Betrayal" Contest, Dane Ann! I wish you good luck! Great job as usual! Peace and love, Audrey

Elaine George

Date: 1/15/2010 6:25:00 AM

Went to the movies last night and saw 'It's complicated'. This pretty much sums it up. This Haiku speaks volumes, Dane. lainie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/15/2010 6:13:00 AM

Good one for this contest. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 1/15/2010 5:26:00 AM

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/15/2010 4:53:00 AM

It is good to see you back on soup, Dane Ann! I also have to work and finish on a book I want to be published in Spring, still a big job to complete. Tha takes a lot of time from writing poetry. Thank you for your comments and hope you had a good start in 2010. Gert

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 1/15/2010 3:49:00 AM

Some people just don't get it: An X is an X for a reason. Good luck in the contest, Dane Ann. I like the traditional 5/7/5 form of Haiku. Love, Iolanda

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/14/2010 5:09:00 PM

Great entry in Adelana's Contest, Dane! I wish you good luck! Thank you for your kind comments on my poem! Peace and love, Audrey

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/14/2010 5:08:00 PM

Didn't you was an artist.. dont place all of my art on line but some. Looking forward to seeing some of yours, also enjoyed this short poetry yet powerful. Visit me sometime www.twitter.com/derrickpoetry

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/14/2010 3:44:00 PM

Glad your feeling better..Your writing is just great. This is a witty piece. BG

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/14/2010 12:48:00 PM

Six months is such a short time for two people who thought they were in love, Dane Ann. This is truly a sad verse that makes us realize how fleeting feelings can be. Best of luck in the contest! Love you, Carolyn