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Shipbuilding In the Usa

! ^ (To) (build) (anything) (is not easy. ((To built in)) (America you) (((need palms))) ((greasy. Palms)) (of Congressmen) a few Senators to (so a new frontier) ((can be made for)) (all of you. So, kids) (born in the next few) (generations, can have) (a place to live and not) (((die of starvation. To))) (build a spaceship takes) ((genius galore and co-)) operation shore to shore. (It takes lots of courage) ((and vision quite sage)) to instigate a ship on the stage. To light the rocket to fill full the hull, so, a ((few of us can fly free)) as a dove. To the moon ((to the planets to even)) a star. ^^^^^^^ ^^^^ ^^^^^^^ !!!!!!!! !!!!! !!!!
*For the How to build a Spaceship Contest

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Date: 2/8/2010 1:08:00 PM
Deb, I am FINALLY getting to the results of THIS contest, and remembering how great this one was. I think I finally have seen ALL winners of all the contests posted!! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/27/2010 10:21:00 PM
Zowie, I need to see how high you placed in THIS contest (one I didn't DARE attempt) and you took it to blastoff!!! Congrats I guess are in order! (and thanks again for the HM) Andrea
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Date: 1/22/2010 4:00:00 PM
Awesome drawing ... smile ... love this one!! Congratulations on your win in Matt's contest.
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Date: 1/22/2010 2:06:00 PM
Woooooooooooooooooooow!!!
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Date: 1/21/2010 11:01:00 AM
Hey, this is really neat, Deborah! Clever girl you are. Congratulations on your success in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/21/2010 8:37:00 AM
Yep.....!! Definitely a winner....this was a blast!! Congrats!!!
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Date: 1/21/2010 6:02:00 AM
Love it Deborah! great job on the poem and shape. congratulations on yo9ur fine win! Robert
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Date: 1/21/2010 4:43:00 AM
Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in Matt's contest.. great artwork as well as word work.. congrats again.. well deserved win... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/21/2010 3:36:00 AM
Congratulations, on your success in Matt Calari’s “How to Build a Spaceship” contest with this imaginative shape poem. Your creative skills shine, as always. Lovingly and with Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/18/2010 12:35:00 AM
I think I've got the better shape :p, but I prefer your words. Full marks for cinesism (erk no dictonary...) It's hard to get it to line up nicely without a monospaced font isn't it Good Luck Nick
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Date: 1/7/2010 11:57:00 AM
This reads very nice and the look is AWESOME. Great job with creativity! Luv, Andrea PS good luck in the contest!!
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Date: 1/5/2010 7:32:00 PM
Awesome! Deborah! And very creative and true. Good luck on the contest! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comment on my poem today. Caroline.
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Date: 1/5/2010 3:52:00 PM
nice shape. terrible subject. jhl
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Date: 1/5/2010 1:40:00 PM
Good luck in the contest Deborah! Good write here! (Soup Mail) Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 1/5/2010 10:53:00 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/5/2010 5:13:00 AM
Wow! AWESOME!!!!! Deb. If you wish to comment to J. A.'s poem, go to top of thee page and in the black strip there is a tag to click, poet or poem - select either, than type in the poem or poets name and it will take you there. The above is an example of why you win the contests. You earn it! Lainie
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Date: 1/5/2010 1:44:00 AM
Amazing work Deborah, you may blast yourself to first place with this one...Raul
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Date: 1/4/2010 7:41:00 PM
Sure looks and sounds like a good rocket to me, a lot of work...thanks for your words on Last Page..Danny
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Date: 1/4/2010 6:02:00 PM
great concrete!! love it! you are right on.
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Date: 1/4/2010 2:52:00 PM
Lots of work in this one that is winning material for sure. Good luck. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 1/4/2010 2:26:00 PM
Wow!!! This is awesome!! Looks like it's ready to blast right off my computer screen!!!!
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