Ship of Dreams

This elaborate fantasy
built cloud by cloud
into a cumulus
to transport us
in a state of ecstasy
to eternal bliss
the big ship of dreams
mugged by reality
a thunderstorm
of epic proportions
and the deluge
to claim us.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Theraven Avatar
October 10, 2019 at 10:03 AM
vince, I like this poem. Don't think I've read from you before. You have a unique style in your writing that bespeaks intelligence and compassion (though tactful). Though these qualities don't count for much these days I'm afraid. -Richard
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October 17, 2019 at 9:38 PM
Thank you for your awesome comment,Richard. My apologies for my late reply and I want to thank you for following me also, Sincerely, Vince.
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