Ship In a Bottle

my dream vacation
blue blanket, ocean water
ship in a bottle
July 18, 2014 Contest: One Solo Epic Senryu or Haiku - In a Bottle - Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A
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Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 10:19 PM
just saw your reply to me by accident. I rarely notice replies like this, sweetie, I just go to the person's poem and reply. Anyway, my cruise was also to BAhamas. Did you do Carnival. It was so long ago I got to take it. Sure wish my husband would have gone. It is my goal before i die, try to get that guy to take a decent vacation like a cruise!!
Smith Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 8:28 AM
No it wasn't Carnival Cruises, I don't think. It was our Senior trip in high school. Big school. 34 graduates. Lol. We worked our buns off for two years raising the money.. It was a ship named Flavia.. Had a blast.. That was 35 years ago!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 19, 2014 at 11:44 AM
EXELLENT!
Smith Avatar
July 20, 2014 at 8:29 AM
Thank you, Connie dear! Hugs.. Arlene
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 4:38 PM
Oh, I LOVE this. Cruise vacation is the only way to go!!
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 6:05 PM
Been on one.. Our Senior trip was to the Bahamas.. Loved it! Thanks for the comments dear Andrea!.. Hugs.. Arlene
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 3:32 PM
wonderful Senryu good luck in the contests Ive seen some fabulous entries! Hugs Jan xxx
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 4:11 PM
Thank you, sweet Jan!.. Hugs.. Arlene
A. Sharma Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Oh Arlene this is so lovely! Haiku is just a sweet click in the mind,, n it really did happen to u dear! Gl in contest!
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Thank you so much for such encouragement, sweet Doc.!.. Hugs... Arlene
Gorelick Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 1:01 PM
Awesome! ..Now why didn't I think of that! lol BG
Smith Avatar
July 18, 2014 at 1:05 PM
Thanks, sweet Barbara! That is what I have said about the ones I have read! Lol.. Hugs.. Arlene
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