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Ship In a Bottle

my dream vacation
blue blanket, ocean water
ship in a bottle
July 18, 2014 Contest: One Solo Epic Senryu or Haiku - In a Bottle - Sponsor: Poet Destroyer A

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/19/2014 10:19:00 PM
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just saw your reply to me by accident. I rarely notice replies like this, sweetie, I just go to the person's poem and reply. Anyway, my cruise was also to BAhamas. Did you do Carnival. It was so long ago I got to take it. Sure wish my husband would have gone. It is my goal before i die, try to get that guy to take a decent vacation like a cruise!!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/20/2014 8:28:00 AM
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No it wasn't Carnival Cruises, I don't think. It was our Senior trip in high school. Big school. 34 graduates. Lol. We worked our buns off for two years raising the money.. It was a ship named Flavia.. Had a blast.. That was 35 years ago!!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 7/19/2014 11:44:00 AM
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EXELLENT!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/20/2014 8:29:00 AM
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Thank you, Connie dear! Hugs.. Arlene
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 7/18/2014 4:38:00 PM
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Oh, I LOVE this. Cruise vacation is the only way to go!!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 6:05:00 PM
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Been on one.. Our Senior trip was to the Bahamas.. Loved it! Thanks for the comments dear Andrea!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2014 3:32:00 PM
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wonderful Senryu good luck in the contests Ive seen some fabulous entries! Hugs Jan xxx
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 4:11:00 PM
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Thank you, sweet Jan!.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 7/18/2014 2:02:00 PM
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Oh Arlene this is so lovely! Haiku is just a sweet click in the mind,, n it really did happen to u dear! Gl in contest!
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 2:13:00 PM
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Thank you so much for such encouragement, sweet Doc.!.. Hugs... Arlene
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 7/18/2014 1:01:00 PM
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Awesome! ..Now why didn't I think of that! lol BG
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Arlene Smith
Date: 7/18/2014 1:05:00 PM
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Thanks, sweet Barbara! That is what I have said about the ones I have read! Lol.. Hugs.. Arlene

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