Mystic Rose Rose Poet Free verse

Ship At Sea

A bridge was crossed, and when I count
the things I've lost,  
you come to mind,
a ship at sea, searching for its ghost.




4/24/2021
Originally in Bridges Of The Past 
Liberum Divisa 5 contest 
Sponsor: Gregory R Barden

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Michelle Faulkner May 26, 2021 at 8:10 PM Wow, how mournful and melancholy, gives me shivers, congratulations on your well earned win!

Paula Goldsmith May 26, 2021 at 9:47 AM Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! Few words with much said. A wonderful write and picture. Have a blessed day..................

Gregory Richard Barden May 25, 2021 at 4:51 PM Sincere congratulations on your win in the Liberum Divisa 5 Poetry Contest, Mystic - thank you so much for entering! This was a very tough contest to judge as there were SO many wonderful entries - I loved reading your submission. Blessings! - the bard Mystic Rose Rose May 25, 2021 at 7:19 PM Thank you dear Gregory for choosing my poem, I'm honored, God bless !

Funom Makama April 27, 2021 at 7:01 PM Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.

Quoth Theraven April 24, 2021 at 6:28 PM Mystic Rose Rose, Ah wonderful verse, like waking in the middle of the night to a familiar old movie playing on the TV. -Richard

Darlene De Beaulieu April 24, 2021 at 11:13 AM Hello Mystic Rose. Rose, I do believe that the ships do have their ghosts .I like this poem .blessings my friend.

Vasco Ludovice April 24, 2021 at 7:52 AM I liked it very much! Very emotional!