R J. Elless Poet Free verse

Shiny Pearls

In the night
different world.
City lights.
shiny pearls.

Losing sight
loved that girl.
Have to try.
Mindless swirl.

Will I love again
or never tomorrow.
All in break or bend.
Heavy, with sorrow.

In the night
Different world.
City lights
shiny pearls.

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R J. Elless December 22, 2024 at 6:51 AM Inky, you are so kind. Thank you, For that wonderful reply. I am happy you liked it. Poetic gem, geez. Merry Christmas and Holiday's.

Ink Empress December 22, 2024 at 2:18 AM This has a very melodious rhythm to it and i love the flow of imagery throughout your well woven words in such an evocative and mellifluous manner! Pleasure reading this poetic gem! Sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich December 19, 2024 at 4:42 PM This is so nice. Also love the great fliow R J. Elless December 22, 2024 at 6:56 AM Thank you so much, Andrea. These short verses look easy, Not, so much. It has more punch. My 2Cents. Merry Christmas and New year.

Kim Rodrigues December 18, 2024 at 5:14 PM Lovely imagery! Touches the heart! R J. Elless December 22, 2024 at 7:17 AM Thank you, My Friend. This came to me quickly, like they do sometimes, as you know. Better to love and lost as they say. Merry Christmas Happy New Year to you and yours.

Silent One December 18, 2024 at 2:37 PM Vivid imagery thought out your poem.. R J. Elless December 22, 2024 at 7:21 AM Thank you, Silent One. Sometimes that is a Residual. Merry Christmas Happy Holidays.