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Shiny Pearls

In the night different world. City lights. shiny pearls. Losing sight loved that girl. Have to try. Mindless swirl. Will I love again or never tomorrow. All in break or bend. Heavy, with sorrow. In the night Different world. City lights shiny pearls.

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R J. Elless

Date: 12/22/2024 6:51:00 AM

Inky, you are so kind. Thank you, For that wonderful reply. I am happy you liked it. Poetic gem, geez. Merry Christmas and Holiday's.

Ink Empress

Date: 12/22/2024 2:18:00 AM

This has a very melodious rhythm to it and i love the flow of imagery throughout your well woven words in such an evocative and mellifluous manner! Pleasure reading this poetic gem! Sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2024 4:42:00 PM

This is so nice. Also love the great fliow

R J. Elless
Date: 12/22/2024 6:56:00 AM

Thank you so much, Andrea. These short verses look easy, Not, so much. It has more punch. My 2Cents. Merry Christmas and New year.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/18/2024 5:14:00 PM

Lovely imagery! Touches the heart!

R J. Elless
Date: 12/22/2024 7:17:00 AM

Thank you, My Friend. This came to me quickly, like they do sometimes, as you know. Better to love and lost as they say. Merry Christmas Happy New Year to you and yours.

Silent One

Date: 12/18/2024 2:37:00 PM

Vivid imagery thought out your poem..

R J. Elless
Date: 12/22/2024 7:21:00 AM

Thank you, Silent One. Sometimes that is a Residual. Merry Christmas Happy Holidays.