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Shiny Blue Eyes

Let me hold you one more time before you go Next time we meet , is a time that we don't know Let me hold you once again , before you spread your wings to fly Only God knows what will happen to me after this goodbye Allow me to see your shiny blue eyes once again Oh there's a lot of upcoming torture to me , oh there's a major pain Can I touch you for the last time before they lay you in the ground ? May I hear your beloving voice , may you crash the emptiness sound ? Time was too cruel to give me what I ask , it took you in a flash It buried you under the ground and burned me down to ash It's a very hard task to live in a world wher I breathe up and you breathe down Where I get to live among all these voices but yet can't reach you're sound In the memory of my dear beloving grandpa , gone but never forgotten . May your soul rest in peace (6/5/2018 sunday , 3:10 PM )

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Harry Horsman

Date: 11/6/2018 4:40:00 PM

Beautiful poetry, for your Grandpa Dalia, thank you for sharing..

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/16/2018 7:14:00 AM

Thank you very much dear Harry for your lovely comment // hugs

Anil Deo

Date: 8/17/2018 4:20:00 AM

So sad for your loss, Dalia. But he knws Salaam, that Peace ... we all think about many times. Some commit suicide to get peace. But we are stronger, survivors ... leaving when God calls, not before. Salaam and shalom, in our Creator, through His Son, Jesus (Yeshua). Anil

Dalia Shahein
Date: 10/13/2018 12:15:00 PM

Thank you my dear for your words they mean so much to me ??

Eric Boddie

Date: 7/28/2018 2:11:00 PM

as long as it has been....you are still so dear my friend....though we may never physically meet....knowing your mind and heart, to me, is such a feat....because you are so very sincere....and for that, my friendship with you shall never disappear....this is Beautifully tragic dalia....

Dalia Shahein
Date: 8/8/2018 7:12:00 PM

Thank you so much my sweet friend , I really do appreciate your words it means a lot , and I'm honored to have a great friendship with you , my sweet awesome friend , many thanks and hugs ...

Lyric Man

Date: 6/26/2018 5:15:00 AM

Sad but excellent write, Dalia!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 6/26/2018 3:37:00 PM

Thank you very much my friend for your words , it means so much.

Silent One

Date: 6/26/2018 4:20:00 AM

Sorry to hear about your grandpa... no pain such as loss.. Hope you are ok Dalia..

Dalia Shahein
Date: 6/26/2018 3:36:00 PM

Thank you my friend , and it's the worst feeling ever to loes someone you love , I'm trying to be okay but it's hard since my grandpa almost raise me , he was a father and a friend to me , he was my world .I appreciate your comment means a lot to me.

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/25/2018 7:23:00 PM

A lovely dedication...one that runs through your veins...you will never forget...All the best Dalia

Dalia Shahein
Date: 6/25/2018 7:35:00 PM

Thank you very much my friend for your uplifting words , no one can forget a precious human that meant the world to him , it's always hard but at least we have memories to stick with , I appreciate your visit to my poem as I appreciate your words , thanks.