Shining the Light

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Written 22nd January 2025
There's a taste of heaven found here on earth Stupendous blessings adorning life’s worth Reasons to smile, as we tread through each day Spreading cheer to those we meet on our way. Everyone has troubles, bringing the downs Remember smiles are friendlier than frowns Confide in Christ, you can depend on Him He will answer, peace then resides within. When your heart’s grown cold, your hand God will hold Reach out to Him and the Light will explode Bask in divine glory, embrace the grace You’ll find a smile will never leave your face. Light that’s shining through the soul, heart and face Leads to where we'll share God's celestial place Somewhere out there, beyond the golden gate Where lost loved one's and friends patiently wait.

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Date: 2/14/2025 12:09:00 PM
Beryl, While I am not a believer in an afterlife, I do love your poem. Regardless of what binds the universe together, being here and able to help each other with a smile or a bit of aid makes life completely worth it. Amazing really how this all works! Smiles!!
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Date: 1/25/2025 2:02:00 PM
Beryl! This beautigul and enchanting and holds ultimate truth….fantastic work. Love, Pangiexoxo
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/28/2025 4:06:00 PM
Thank you very much Pangie, most grateful. Love Beryl xoxo
Date: 1/23/2025 9:33:00 AM
Hello Beryl, This is such a beautiful poem, brilliantly done. I felt tears welling up in my eyes as I read the last couple of lines. Have a wonderful evening my friend.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/23/2025 6:02:00 PM
Hi Zyrool, thank you so much, I truly appreciate your kind comments. Enjoy your evening too dear friend… Beryl
Date: 1/23/2025 6:55:00 AM
Hi sister Beryl, I do hope there is a heaven where our loved ones wait, your written another heart touching poem. xx
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/23/2025 12:41:00 PM
Hi brother John, I believe there is a heaven where our prayers are heard, and our lost loved ones souls go to. I’ll tell you why I believe in Soupmail… Sis Beryl xx
Date: 1/23/2025 5:54:00 AM
Dear Beryl, i always enjoy reading your beautiful way with weaving words and how you rhyme in such a sublime manner. The deep and soulfully spiritual message you’ve conveyed here is truly is moving . I especially love “Somewhere out there, beyond the golden gate Where lost loved one's and friends patiently wait.” Excellent ending and so true what youv stated too. Pleasure reading this. Sending you light today and always
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/23/2025 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Ink, I truly appreciate your comments. I admire your unique style of writing, it’s always a pleasurable read… Light sent to you in return… Beryl
Date: 1/23/2025 2:02:00 AM
This is a great spiritual poem. We used to be like that in Malta. Now, many foreigners are spoiling everything, and many Maltese have become corrupt. I must pray for them.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/23/2025 12:27:00 PM
Thank you Victor, most people I’m sure just want to settle and live in peace, there’s always going to those who don’t everywhere in the world, I will join you in prayer… Beryl
Date: 1/22/2025 5:22:00 PM
Nice poem. He does want to have a close relationship with us which can help us through many situations.
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/22/2025 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Oliver, I agree… Beryl
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