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Shining Self

What a disappointment when the sunrise is covered by clouds I guess as powerful as the suns light is It has days when it frowns Good days when it shines so bright When its happy and everything is just right And bad days when it just wants to be under the covers and hide just like you and I But even on its darkest days it still has a job get done even on the suns darkest days its still shining light on someone 5/2/2018 Kale Brereton

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Date: 8/20/2018 4:39:00 PM
Very refreshing words of encouragement to "Be Courageous!"
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Date: 6/10/2018 10:26:00 AM
I really enjoyed this one Kale. Very nice :)
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Kale Brereton
Date: 6/10/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thank you so much for all of your supportive comments Heidi!!
Date: 5/4/2018 3:45:00 PM
This is lovely, especially the last two lines!
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Kale Brereton
Date: 5/7/2018 11:09:00 AM
Thank you very much for taking the time to comment on this poem! Hope you have a great day!

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