Shining On Her Back

Light shines on her back So smooth is the contour Her presence is intact She is one that I adore Light illuminates every pore Showing her skin, she allures
Russell Sivey Entrant into Debbie Guzzi's "Kindle the Lights" contest 12/2/2012
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Guzzi Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:58 PM
Congrad's on your fine write winning high honors, Russ. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 11:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Kindle the Lights" contest Russell. Love Carol
Liwayway Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations friend Russell on you win..awesome write indeed :)
Gasun Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Russell! love/hugs, Leonora
Andresen Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 1:59 AM
Congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading it. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :)
Sweetheart Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 8:07 PM
congrats Russell luv on a remarkable write and impressive win my friend .. a first place for me .. so romantic and tenderly penned ..
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 7:27 PM
Congratulations Russell xx
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December 4, 2012 at 4:49 PM
Russell, ;-) congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA
Horne Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 3:03 PM
beautiful and romantic - love it
Williams Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 1:34 AM
Russell this is very romantic and if I may say so very illuminating good luck...David
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 1:09 AM
this is so sensuous Russell love it xx
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 11:10 PM
oh so beautiful .. so elegantly written my friend .. lovely visual extolling a great love .. most exquisite light and write Russell luv ..
Johnson Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 10:41 PM
and love is on this track, we hope forever more....
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