Shining On Her Back

Light shines on her back So smooth is the contour Her presence is intact She is one that I adore Light illuminates every pore Showing her skin, she allures
Russell Sivey Entrant into Debbie Guzzi's "Kindle the Lights" contest 12/2/2012

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Date: 12/7/2012 6:58:00 PM
Congrad's on your fine write winning high honors, Russ. Light & Love
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Date: 12/7/2012 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Debbie's "Kindle the Lights" contest Russell. Love Carol
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Date: 12/6/2012 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations friend Russell on you win..awesome write indeed :)
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Date: 12/5/2012 6:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your awesome win my dear Russell! love/hugs, Leonora
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Date: 12/5/2012 1:59:00 AM
Congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading it. :) - oxox Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/4/2012 8:07:00 PM
congrats Russell luv on a remarkable write and impressive win my friend .. a first place for me .. so romantic and tenderly penned ..
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Date: 12/4/2012 7:27:00 PM
Congratulations Russell xx
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Date: 12/4/2012 4:49:00 PM
Russell, ;-) congratulations with your win in Debbie's "Kindle the light contest" Enjoyed reading all her winners. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. take care~:-) LINDA
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Date: 12/3/2012 3:03:00 PM
beautiful and romantic - love it
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Date: 12/3/2012 1:34:00 AM
Russell this is very romantic and if I may say so very illuminating good luck...David
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Date: 12/3/2012 1:09:00 AM
this is so sensuous Russell love it xx
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Date: 12/2/2012 11:10:00 PM
oh so beautiful .. so elegantly written my friend .. lovely visual extolling a great love .. most exquisite light and write Russell luv ..
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Date: 12/2/2012 10:41:00 PM
and love is on this track, we hope forever more....
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