Shining Beautiful

Hot sexy beautiful awakening 
Rising out from the ashes 
Alone breathing silently in thoughts
an amazing dream begins to shine

I felt the sun with her gentle fingers
softly touching with her light 
Stepping outside yawning, birds of all kinds 
whistling in choir 
Looking across the mountains
felt warm weaving love 
Gently brushing softly
within a warm sweet gentle, kissing breeze

Looking down through the valley
sweeping out towards, the great Atlantic sea
So many beautiful colors in blossom
Looking towards the sky, white mother of pearl clouds
dancing softly across vision
Her color a Heavenly baby blue

At that moment in time, searching 
inside wonderful thoughts
They were sweetly kissing you
far away in a distant paradise
Always and forever golden 
treading these sands
To walk hand in hand with you
sweet angel of love
Warm are the footprints that treads 
Softly landing on the deepest sands

Entering the heart
through the eyes of a soul
Captured in this vision
from inside out 
A picture beautiful dream
sweetly smiles on you love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Schneiter Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 10:50 PM
Dear liam, Breathtaking . . . a composition of the first rank. I savored every line (and wanted more). Congratulations and bravo!
Mcdaid Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 11:00 PM
paul thank you dear friend for the outstanding beautiful comment deeply appreciated bless you
Gifford Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 2:33 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem with all its wonderful expressions of love and so beautifully written.
Mcdaid Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 5:28 PM
darlene thank you for the kind and truly wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Nair Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 8:56 PM
Excellent writing, another tribute to quintessential love!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 2:01 AM
thank you for your kindness truly beautiful comment god bless
Mcintosh Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 11:13 PM
Congratulations on poem of the day. God bless you and happy writing. Love and prayers, Gina
Mcdaid Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 3:15 AM
regina thank you ever so kindly for the blessing and wonderful comment bless you
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 8:47 PM
love it... :) very sweet!!!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 24, 2014 at 3:06 AM
bless you olive sweet beautiful comment
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 6:02 PM
A fantastic choice for Poem of the Day my friend. That is the kind of love one feels with a first delicious kiss with a soul mate. Takes a great poet's heart to write like that. Bravo!!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 6:19 PM
took me quite some time love is a souls recognition of each others bond over space without touch hold the inside breathless with lots of colour yeah the kiss seals the deal such innocence takes over really is very beautiful without fault perfect thank you for your kind and beautiful words bless you
Wilcox Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:50 PM
I knew it first times I laid My Eyes on this One...Congratulations Friend...Excellent write and I'm so happy that Your being recognized...This is so awesome...Be humble and Proud that is How I see You friend...
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 5:40 PM
i am always humbled by beauty truly heartfelt beautiful comment bless you deeply appreciated charlene
Bateman Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:26 PM
Liam . . . A perfect free verse write. Quite enchanting and quite beautiful. Very superbly done!! Congratulations to you Liam for Poem of the Day!! Best Wishes, Gary
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 4:13 PM
gary truly amazing beautiful comment touching heartfelt thank you for you kindness bless you
Lamoureux Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:59 PM
Excellent choice for poem of the day. Congratulations Liam!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:34 PM
thank you ever so much richard truly wonderful comment appreciated deeply
Smith Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 3:54 AM
Such a fitting honor for a wonderful poem and talented poet....cheers Tim
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 5:01 AM
thank you kindly tim i wrote this with every ounce of love deep down pal wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Walker  Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:27 AM
Congratulations on being chose of the poem of the day Liam... Verlena
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 2:45 AM
ah thank you so kind varlena truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Yvonne Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:10 AM
Congratulations this is an excellent choice for poem of the day.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:15 AM
smiling maurice thank you for your kindness
Manassian Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 5:21 AM
Oh Liam....is there really such depth of love? You make a heart believe. Lovely poem, my dear....every line...a beautiful dream....Hugs
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 8:35 AM
yeah there is such thing as love i would defend it to my last breath it never goes away that is how i write sharing my deepest thoughts thank you kindly eileen wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Inyoureyes Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 6:38 AM
Took the words right from my mouth :)
Trifiatis Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 4:40 AM
Love makes all of us poets but to some give also wings that can fly away to lands unknown to shores undiscovered! You belong to the last category, my good friend Liam! Excellent writing!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 5:07 AM
so terribly sorry about spelling your name wrong demetrios my minds not with it these day
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September 22, 2014 at 5:05 AM
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September 22, 2014 at 4:47 AM
thank you so kindly it would be like all wishes and dreams your comment touched me deeply demrious
Deschler Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 2:05 AM
You always write such beautiful romantic poems, and this one is no exception. I think it is one of your best.... I really enjoyed the wonderful imagery in this piece. A lovely write, Liam!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 4:49 AM
thank you kindly kelly truly beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Wilcox Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 1:12 AM
I;m was more then impressed with Your Poem...Sir this so beautifully written...Excellent write and I hope You win an awesome reward for Your Achievement...I'm just in awe over this One...I'm saving it to My Favorites and believe Me I am very picking at My Favorites...This is a Polished work of words...
Wilcox Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 5:13 AM
Blessing Received,May God away guide Your words,God Bless Always... Amen
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 4:53 AM
ah such a wonderful comment touching me so deeply brought a tear drop to my eyes thank you from the bottom of my heart truly appreciated thank you ever so much god bless you
Anish Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 10:00 PM
Sounds like a sweet time in your life! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Mcdaid Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 5:04 AM
oh it was magical thank you kindly for the wonderful comment bless you
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