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Shine On Moon

"Shine On Moon" Shine on moon! I see you up there... Watching over me, Back-dropped by the sky Netted by the sea, With those eyes--that stare. I hear you, Moon, A haunting pull That beckons me, Keen as radar*. I see you Shinning--Oh! Bright as Noon!* ...A pip* To reer* There... ...There To reer* A pip*... Bright as Noon!* Shinning--Oh! I see you Keen as radar* That beckons me, A haunting pull, I hear you, Moon With those eyes--that stare Netted by the sea, Back-dropped by the sky Watching over me, I see you up there... Shine on moon! deborah burch 4/12/2012 _____________________________________________________ Palindromes List*: Entire poem("Shine On Moon"*) is Line unit palindrome* radar* Noon* pip* reer*

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Date: 4/24/2012 4:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work...Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 4/23/2012 6:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Outstanding write. Great job. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 4/22/2012 1:41:00 PM
Well done Debs, Congratulations xx
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Date: 4/13/2012 12:00:00 AM
Oh I love how you wrote in this form! An excellent entry for the contest. Best wishes...blessings, Rhonda :))
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Deborah Burch
Date: 4/13/2012 12:29:00 AM
oh thank you Rhonda...so much...big hug,love deb

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