Shine On Moon

"Shine On Moon"


Shine on moon!

I see you up there...
Watching over me,
Back-dropped by the sky
Netted by the sea,
With those eyes--that stare.

I hear you, Moon,
A haunting pull
That beckons me,
Keen as radar*.

I see you
Shinning--Oh!
Bright as Noon!*

...A pip*
To reer*

There...

...There

To reer*
A pip*...

Bright as Noon!*
Shinning--Oh!
I see you

Keen as radar*
That beckons me,
A haunting pull,
I hear you, Moon

With those eyes--that stare
Netted by the sea,
Back-dropped by the sky
Watching over me,
I see you up there...

Shine on moon!


deborah burch
4/12/2012
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Palindromes List*:

Entire poem("Shine On Moon"*) is Line unit palindrome* 
radar*
Noon*
pip*
reer*
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Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 4:04 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work...Congrats on your win..Sara
Brown Avatar
April 23, 2012 at 6:38 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 2:45 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Outstanding write. Great job. Kudos. hugs, Ralph
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 22, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Well done Debs, Congratulations xx
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love how you wrote in this form! An excellent entry for the contest. Best wishes...blessings, Rhonda :))
Burch Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 12:29 AM
oh thank you Rhonda...so much...big hug,love deb
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