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Shine On

The shine on his shoes The shine on his car The shine on his face ~ shines like a star His suit freshly pressed His pants perfect crease His shirt sports no wrinkles ~ sharp tie's centerpiece His teeth fairly sparkle their pearliest white He looks oh-so-sharp ~ his future is bright

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Date: 3/27/2022 8:07:00 PM
This one shines!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/27/2022 8:25:00 PM
It's giving me a shiner, it's so shiny. ~ Shiny Penny
Date: 3/25/2022 1:17:00 PM
When I was young, this is what my parents said, I should look for in a man. I think they are all gone. A wonderful write. Today Blessings...................
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/27/2022 8:25:00 PM
All these men ARE gone, Paula -- except for Mike Gentile and me. Take your pick! lol. :) gw
Date: 3/25/2022 11:48:00 AM
Obviously has a wife, mother, or lover looking after him . . . . .
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Date: 3/25/2022 11:04:00 AM
Nice description of his AVATAR Gershon, now tell us what HE looks like......
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Date: 3/24/2022 9:17:00 PM
Job interview? First date? Nah, job interview. Young men don't dress up like that for a first date! And she might wear her latest fashion jeans with holes in them. Go figure!
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Date: 3/24/2022 7:35:00 PM
A positive personal appearance is a fast effective way to boost self-confidence, Gershon. Nicely penned poem with a great message to grasp.
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