Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Shine On

The shine on his shoes
  The shine on his car
The shine on his face
  ~ shines like a star

His suit freshly pressed
  His pants perfect crease
His shirt sports no wrinkles
  ~ sharp tie's centerpiece

His teeth fairly sparkle their pearliest white
  He looks oh-so-sharp ~ his future is bright

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Caren Krutsinger March 27, 2022 at 8:07 PM This one shines! Gershon Wolf March 27, 2022 at 8:25 PM It's giving me a shiner, it's so shiny. ~ Shiny Penny

Paula Goldsmith March 25, 2022 at 1:17 PM When I was young, this is what my parents said, I should look for in a man. I think they are all gone. A wonderful write. Today Blessings................... Gershon Wolf March 27, 2022 at 8:25 PM All these men ARE gone, Paula -- except for Mike Gentile and me. Take your pick! lol. :) gw

Rico Leffanta March 25, 2022 at 11:48 AM Obviously has a wife, mother, or lover looking after him . . . . .

John Lawless March 25, 2022 at 11:04 AM Nice description of his AVATAR Gershon, now tell us what HE looks like......

L Milton Hankins March 24, 2022 at 9:17 PM Job interview? First date? Nah, job interview. Young men don't dress up like that for a first date! And she might wear her latest fashion jeans with holes in them. Go figure!

Sotto Poet March 24, 2022 at 7:35 PM A positive personal appearance is a fast effective way to boost self-confidence, Gershon. Nicely penned poem with a great message to grasp.