Shine On

The maples blushed attempting to outshine
the flamboyant forsythias.
Willows wept strands of puce pollen.
The air lay damp, ponderous, pregnant
with the promise of peonies.
The mulched ground was pierce with spears of hyacinths;
crowned with dancing daffodils 
and fragrant hyacinth.
The sweet ripe smell of manure meandered
through the freshly turned soil;
steaming in the morning mist.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009


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Date: 5/3/2010 9:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's Contest "How Does Your Garden Grow" Deb. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/2/2010 1:26:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem TEACH in this contest.. am catching up while sunning on the beach... a wonderful win for an equally wonderful write... luv... from the ""Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/1/2010 6:21:00 PM
Well done Deb..love the alliteration of the pregnant air....congratulations....Margaret
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Date: 5/1/2010 4:09:00 AM
Well deserved!!!
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Date: 2/18/2009 12:36:00 PM
Awe, sounds like the beauty you would see in a flower bed or garden. I love the description here. Wonderful write Deborah
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Date: 2/11/2009 10:56:00 AM
This is a terrific write Debra..beauty streams through this entire piece.
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Date: 2/11/2009 10:19:00 AM
Oh, let the spring sun guide them from the flourishing earth to the awaiting air. The is beautiful! So detailed and just great. Michael
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