Unseeking Seeker Poet Etheree

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Shine On

Shine
angel
bewitching,
self-luminous,
appearing at night,
when we are half awake,
just before our dreaming state,
delighting at our wondrous eyes,
conjoined by hidden expectations,
spurred by our ego seeking attainment!

Oh hermit, our desires birth these dream forms,
thus, light of clear truth dawns in stillness,
when presence abides in silence,
mind body in emptiness,
magnetised in fullness,
whereupon Gods light
bright, yet soft white,
love suffused,
clearly
shines!

12-April-2021

Writing prompt -Shine - poetry contest
Sponsor: Constance La France

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Constance La France April 21, 2021 at 4:14 PM Seeker, wonderful, congratulations on your placement in my Writing Prompt Shine Challenge with this beautiful Etheree poem, so well penned, and I like your chosen image too, love _Constance Unseeking Seeker April 21, 2021 at 8:11 PM Thank you Constance, for hosting such an inspiring contest! I wish I could have entered the other poems I wrote on this theme, as well! :)

Sam Kauffman April 21, 2021 at 10:48 AM Congratulations Seeker! Your use of words is so uniquely creative - very inspiring. This is a powerful write. Blessings of light to you. Unseeking Seeker April 21, 2021 at 8:09 PM Thanks Sam!

Edward Ibeh April 12, 2021 at 11:11 AM Beautifully done, Seeker:-) If this is for Constance's contest, good luck! Unseeking Seeker April 12, 2021 at 6:15 PM Thanks Edward! I have three ‘shine’ based poems now ... undecided about the entry, as yet!