Shine and Twinkle

An aspiring actor named Max Finkel
  Felt that his star would soon shine and twinkle ~
    He just needed one small part
    That would provide him a start ~ 
  Played a 'Hobo:' Max tinkled and stinkled
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Rodrigues Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 3:38 PM
I doubt anyone’s taking a shine to him.
Wolf Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 7:13 PM
Shiny would be a great name for this actor if he weren't so stinky. P.U!
Gentile Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 7:26 AM
OMG GW, your mind works in mysterious ways and I love it!! You've now added Tinkled an Stinkled as a new catch phrase !! Happy Tuesday!!
Wolf Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 7:16 PM
My 'mind' is a stretch, of course... as my 'mind' has been completely 'mined' already. But if you don't mind, then ~ I Don't Mind. :) Phil Collins
Y. Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 6:10 AM
Lol! Gershon, I enjoyed your funny limerick. Have a nice day-Alexis
Wolf Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 7:18 PM
Hey, long time no look at. Thanks for the view and the comment, Alexis. Keep smiling, Gershon
George Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 11:33 PM
This is so very hilarious ! Some are so keen to get into acting that they are ready to take up any role to have a start. Enjoyed your perfect rhyming, Gershon !
Wolf Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 7:21 PM
Glad you like it, Valsa. Keep smiling, gw
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