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Shine and Twinkle

An aspiring actor named Max Finkel Felt that his star would soon shine and twinkle ~ He just needed one small part That would provide him a start ~ Played a 'Hobo:' Max tinkled and stinkled

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 8/16/2022 3:38:00 PM

I doubt anyone’s taking a shine to him.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/16/2022 7:13:00 PM

Shiny would be a great name for this actor if he weren't so stinky. P.U!

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/16/2022 7:26:00 AM

OMG GW, your mind works in mysterious ways and I love it!! You've now added Tinkled an Stinkled as a new catch phrase !! Happy Tuesday!!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/16/2022 7:16:00 PM

My 'mind' is a stretch, of course... as my 'mind' has been completely 'mined' already. But if you don't mind, then ~ I Don't Mind. :) Phil Collins

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/16/2022 6:10:00 AM

Lol! Gershon, I enjoyed your funny limerick. Have a nice day-Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/16/2022 7:18:00 PM

Hey, long time no look at. Thanks for the view and the comment, Alexis. Keep smiling, Gershon

Valsa George

Date: 8/15/2022 11:33:00 PM

This is so very hilarious ! Some are so keen to get into acting that they are ready to take up any role to have a start. Enjoyed your perfect rhyming, Gershon !

Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/16/2022 7:21:00 PM

Glad you like it, Valsa. Keep smiling, gw