Carol Mitra Poet Free verse

Shine

Sometimes you have to break
So that the light seeps in
Slowly through open cracks
Sealing scars and your fears
Shining bright inside out
Sewing cloaks of wisdom
Spools of thread now untwined.

22.4.2021
Contest: Pleiades 5.

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Funom Makama April 27, 2021 at 7:37 PM A big big congratulations on your win. This is well deserved, I enjoyed every bit of this poem. Carol Mitra April 28, 2021 at 12:03 AM Thank you dear Funom....much appreciated :)

Kim Merryman April 25, 2021 at 2:49 PM Carol, congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Gershon Wolf April 24, 2021 at 7:47 PM This is truly haunting, Carol. Penetrates deep. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Cheers, Gershon Carol Mitra April 25, 2021 at 12:43 AM Yes Gershon it is....much appreciated :)

Victor Buhagiar April 21, 2021 at 11:11 PM A very pleasant Pleiades. Carol Mitra April 21, 2021 at 11:45 PM Thank you dear Victor....much appreciated :)