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Shimmering Shadows

Shimmering shadows across the meadow trail Dancing in the afternoon sun, glancing fondly Toward the woodland coolness so invitingly, Beckoning me to stroll beneath the canopy Of overhanging branches hovering protectively Like mothering arms holding the distraught. A place to find one’s peace midst the enfolding Vicissitudes of complex living, such as it is, In these difficult, compelling times we share Unable to discern principled directions clearly While seeking what we feel we have earned, Our fondest endeavors often reputedly lacking. Shimmering shadows, ephemeral, as real as light, Which we cannot take into outstretched hands The branches swaying in a filtered breeze Whispering consoling sighs, while suggesting New imaginings, new lyrics set to new tunes Bring fresh ways of thinking to mother’s child.
Written June 5, 2022 [Experimenting with stream of consciousness poetry] submitted to "2022 Poetry Marathon Mile Eight" sponsored by Mark Toney

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Date: 6/6/2022 12:02:00 AM
This line intrigues me "Vicissitudes of complex living, such as it is," - I am going to delve into the word vicissitudes now.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/6/2022 8:12:00 AM
I love the way that word sort of trips off the tongue. I can't wait to see how you use it! Ha!
Date: 6/5/2022 7:54:00 PM
You have expressed this verse so poetically, Milt. An excellent piece of poetry. Thank you.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/5/2022 8:06:00 PM
Thank you, Shirley. I really appreciate your comment on the poem.

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