Shimmering Fire and Ice

Just over the hill
Beyond the slick black asphalt
misty rain blankets
Cascading through soft sunrays
Shimmering like fire and ice
~*~

12/02/12
(Category:  Nature)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Carrillo Avatar
December 5, 2012 at 10:09 PM
This is good. I wish you luck in the contest. Lucilla
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:18 PM
I just love the imagery you used for this tanka. VEry nice!!
Horne Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 3:12 PM
lovely tanka, Annalise
Lamoureux Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:46 AM
What a pretty picture you have painted. Good luck in contest.
Gorelick Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 7:17 AM
Beautiful...BG
Falotico Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 5:57 PM
Excellent entry my sweet poet friend. Very enjoyed. Michael
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 2:03 PM
an impressive portrait with immense imagery Annalise .. winning wishes for contest theme .. hope u r doing fantastic .. we r all blessed and loving ..
Andresen Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 1:18 PM
A beautiful way to describe it Annalise - wish you luck in the contest. - Hope the first week of December will bring out some Christmas cheer :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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