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Shimmering Fire and Ice

Just over the hill Beyond the slick black asphalt misty rain blankets Cascading through soft sunrays Shimmering like fire and ice ~*~ 12/02/12 (Category: Nature)

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 12/5/2012 10:09:00 PM

This is good. I wish you luck in the contest. Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/3/2012 7:18:00 PM

I just love the imagery you used for this tanka. VEry nice!!

Jack Horne

Date: 12/3/2012 3:12:00 PM

lovely tanka, Annalise

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/3/2012 7:46:00 AM

What a pretty picture you have painted. Good luck in contest.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/3/2012 7:17:00 AM

Beautiful...BG

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 12/2/2012 5:57:00 PM

Excellent entry my sweet poet friend. Very enjoyed. Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/2/2012 2:03:00 PM

an impressive portrait with immense imagery Annalise .. winning wishes for contest theme .. hope u r doing fantastic .. we r all blessed and loving ..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/2/2012 1:18:00 PM

A beautiful way to describe it Annalise - wish you luck in the contest. - Hope the first week of December will bring out some Christmas cheer :) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)