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Shimmering

I walked with heavy childish feet
Where galaxies of white Chervil towered
And asphalt ribbons did dance on air
dividing fields of early summer flowers

On that shimmering Tournant road
from Tynte Park cross to an iron hill
Blossoms in the June sunshine
staying so silent and peacefully still

Before me each cheating rise  
a false promise to a child alone
With five shillings spent on a silver toy
to shoot black crows on my way home

Granite walls of the graveyard now behind
my burning feet soon rest on cooler slate
I will listen to the Stanley's hiss
and boil its sap with the last of that good light

I'd listen to the gentle swing, tick and tock
struggling to keep time on those balmy nights
While shadows eventually bury her black clock
As moths gather about her death stained light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/18/2015 2:44:00 PM
I have to admit that when I see a true Irish name on the list I don't walk, I RUN. I am seldom disappointed and this piece is no excepton. It is witout a doubt a masterful poem, full of brillliant imagery and (if I may say so) typically Irish language. BRAVO my friend! Best wishes, Keith (the Irish, for the most part, really know how to be poets)
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 12/18/2015 4:34:00 PM
you're on the right track... please keep it up! K.
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Declan Molloy
Date: 12/18/2015 4:30:00 PM
Thank you Keith. I'm new to poetry and feel a bit clunky at times but those were kind words indeed

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