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Shimmered In Daydreams

Shimmered in daydreams Twilight fades the dark skies as sunset weaves its light into my weary heart – shining hope on the edge of a glistening horizon calling to me from beyond a saltwater shoreline – shimmered in daydreams as my thoughts of her refuse to rest

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Darren White

Date: 2/22/2017 11:42:00 PM

I hope you find rest there, on that shoreline, in the evening horizon. For me it is always the place where I can calm down and obsereve myself in a more distant way. Sleep well my friend.

Chris Green
Date: 2/23/2017 9:20:00 AM

I have spent many moments resting while watching the sunset. Thanks so much Darren.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/22/2017 5:10:00 PM

This is so nice Chris. It brings the reader right there and into your thoughts too. Special. :)

Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 5:30:00 PM

Thank you Heidi for your nice and encouraging comments. I appreciate you my friend.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/22/2017 4:28:00 PM

As my thoughts of her refuse to rest-How wonderful this feeling here...You are very romantic.

Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 4:46:00 PM

Thanks so very much my sweet friend. It seems those thoughts of her are never ending and I don't believe I would want them to. :)

Christy Stover

Date: 2/22/2017 3:31:00 PM

The depth and beauty of your poetry knows no bounds, Chris.

Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 4:45:00 PM

Thank you Christy, coming from a poet of your caliber, that means so much to me. I appreciate you my friend.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 2/22/2017 2:49:00 PM

I just had to look on even though I said I was closing the computer. This entry most definitely deserves to be seen and heard. Please allow me to say from what I have seen thus far the poetry gods are watching over your pen. I consider myself to be a better reader than writer but I can spot poetry a mile away. Excellent Excellent Excellent

Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 4:45:00 PM

Lisa, what a wonderful comment to leave for me. Your kindness is greatly appreciated and I am humbled by your thoughts. And don't sell yourself short, from the first poem I read of yours I could see your talent and knew that whatever I read by you from that point on would be fantastic. Thank you again.

Tim Smith

Date: 2/22/2017 2:48:00 PM

I can picture walking along the beach lost in thought.

Chris Green
Date: 2/22/2017 4:43:00 PM

Then my message came through loud and clear. :) Thanks so much Tim.