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'shifty' Lars

He was known by his nickname 'Shifty' Lars Who specialized in stealing brand-new cars He'd never get caught (Or, that's what he thought) He's now serving ten to life behind bars

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/13/2019 12:40:00 PM

Crime never pays, Bob. You gave me a great chuckle, especially with the punch line at the end! Hugs, Carolyn

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/12/2019 9:45:00 PM

Sounds as if 'Shifty' shifted into the wrong gear here! Cheers, Gershon

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/13/2019 11:32:00 AM

Thank you Gershon! I always enjoy your witty comments! Almost choked on my cuppa this morn when I read it! Best on you always - BoB

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/12/2019 8:16:00 PM

G'day Bob … I trust he's not doing community service in a saloon serving drinks. I didn't think so - thanks for the giggle Bob - Lindsay

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/13/2019 11:36:00 AM

G'Day, Lindsay: Nope, in this case he's not serving behind a bar but doing his time in the "big house" behind those cold, steel bars! Thanks for commenting on more of my nonsense! - Bob

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/12/2019 7:00:00 PM

Hi Robert, I really enjoy your limericks.If one lived like 'Shifty' did it's good chance they will end up behind bars. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Robert L. Hinshaw
Date: 9/13/2019 11:34:00 AM

And he's not bartending but is doing time in the "big house" - ha. Thank you for your delightful comment and good on you always - Bob