Shifting Sands

My feelings are a house of cards,
My will is the glue,
Without the will of wisdom,
They would be toppled by you.
Where, pray tell .. is my wisdom?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 18, 2011 at 6:44 PM
This has been another exciting episode of "Robert Dufresne's Fortune Cookie Theater!" Why don't U write more of these witty things! So cool! Tension-relievers! Gwendolen
Onclaud Avatar
May 18, 2011 at 5:00 AM
oh robert, do you have new one today?? ;0 huggs, nette
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May 17, 2011 at 5:19 PM
Much for the reader to ponder about in this poem. I really like the second line. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen
Mehta Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 12:59 PM
Thought expressions with apt images, Robert
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May 17, 2011 at 5:14 AM
Pleasant, thought provoking, enjoyed
Onclaud Avatar
May 17, 2011 at 5:07 AM
an inviting call, robert.. fabulous! :) huggs, nette
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May 17, 2011 at 5:03 AM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today Robert. Always a pleasure to read your writing. Love, Carol
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