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Shifting Sands

My feelings are a house of cards, My will is the glue, Without the will of wisdom, They would be toppled by you. Where, pray tell .. is my wisdom?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2011 6:44:00 PM
This has been another exciting episode of "Robert Dufresne's Fortune Cookie Theater!" Why don't U write more of these witty things! So cool! Tension-relievers! Gwendolen
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Date: 5/18/2011 5:00:00 AM
oh robert, do you have new one today?? ;0 huggs, nette
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:19:00 PM
Much for the reader to ponder about in this poem. I really like the second line. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen
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Date: 5/17/2011 12:59:00 PM
Thought expressions with apt images, Robert
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:14:00 AM
Pleasant, thought provoking, enjoyed
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:07:00 AM
an inviting call, robert.. fabulous! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:03:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your outstanding poetry with us today Robert. Always a pleasure to read your writing. Love, Carol
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