Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Shifting Sands

fog and rain at the beach
until the sunshine returns

sand crystals soak up
each ray and twinkle

and soon the breeze
renders its warm caress

sands shift almost giddy
without a care in the world



AP: 1st place 2023

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FJ Thomas January 14, 2023 at 9:18 PM So very serene. Lovely Line Line Gauthier January 15, 2023 at 8:40 AM Thank you, FJ ~

M. L. Kiser January 12, 2023 at 4:36 PM Beautiful feelings penned very nicely; very uplifting. Line Gauthier January 12, 2023 at 5:51 PM Much appreciated, ML ~

JC Brul January 12, 2023 at 8:45 AM Ahhh, what a serenity you bring with this splendid piece of marvel ….Your poems are soothing. Line Gauthier January 12, 2023 at 5:51 PM Thank you so much, JCB ~