Shifting Sands

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fog and rain at the beach until the sunshine returns sand crystals soak up each ray and twinkle and soon the breeze renders its warm caress sands shift almost giddy without a care in the world AP: 1st place 2023 Posted on January 10, 2023

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Fj Thomas

Date: 1/14/2023 9:18:00 PM

So very serene. Lovely Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/15/2023 8:40:00 AM

Thank you, FJ ~

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/12/2023 4:36:00 PM

Beautiful feelings penned very nicely; very uplifting.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/12/2023 5:51:00 PM

Much appreciated, ML ~

Jcb Brul

Date: 1/12/2023 8:45:00 AM

Ahhh, what a serenity you bring with this splendid piece of marvel ….Your poems are soothing.

Line Gauthier
Date: 1/12/2023 5:51:00 PM

Thank you so much, JCB ~