Shifting Sand

Countless ages past,
On this beach of shifting sand
Great mountains once stood.
I can barely remember
The reasons for our parting.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 21, 2008 at 4:36 AM
Great recollection, Jim, puts the readers mind, powerfully in two places. Love, daver
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