Shield

Riding on a sail singly
He went out of the border bravely,
With the rhythm of waves freely 
By carrying shield of faith only...

He had travelled beyond his limitation
Still he is far from his destination,
But he is not caring at all
That is his dream place over all...

After that dreamy evening
That spooky night came,
Which brings storm and squall 
His sail was in middle of hell,
Meanwhile which scattered and fail...

All his dreams were shattered suddenly
He was also drowning mutely,
In that marine hurricane and adventure
Which was rising at every junction...

When he started losing moral and strength
Suddenly he recall his shield of faith,
He endeavour with faith many time
By gazing  him storm also abated this time...

His shield gave him victory and light
And that was the end of that bloody night,
New dawn new destination 
Same shield but new station...

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Date: 2/18/2019 6:44:00 PM
I felt the urgency of finding that shield of Faith! The last glimpse of hope! Lovely from start to finish! Good job!
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Date: 1/29/2019 4:26:00 AM
A shield of Faith is important in any storm, my friend. Well-done!
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Carol Pillay
Date: 1/29/2019 4:49:00 AM
Thank you.
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